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The Switch by A.G. Hill & Nathanael Hill - The Literary Phoenix
I had 42 comments on this as I read it because I could not stop pointing out all its failings. The writing looked like an editor hadn’t even touched it with a 20-foot pole. The characters were flat as pancakes, the world-building was mostly a scientific, condescending talk-down… just… no? Lets get technical here. The writing. The writing style fluctuates between fragments and run-on sentences. The author delights in phrases like “But there’s stuff we don’t have an explanation for that will be science someday.” and “It was a perfectly reasonable question, to which I had no answer.” to get …