Revised 'Finicky Eater' | Writer & Author Teresa Little
When I originally put Finicky Eater on this site, the story was still in its infancy. As in a couple of months removed from being written and of first draft quality. It has since moved into a toddling second draft with another go round of editing awaiting it before advancing to a fast walk then run. I've decided to let the original work stand for those curious to see the writing process. However below is the new and improved first paragraph... Little things tended to add up. Not that Kasha considered this as she grabbed her jacket and headed into the living room. Anticipation quivered in heightened senses becoming a fevered beat pulsing in her head; the soundtrack, devoid of music, was more than a precursor to the night's hunt. It had tapped into a primal rage with a drum solo that rivaled the human heart. More to come...
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