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5 Better Ways to End Your Story

1. The Dialogue Gut-Punch

I usually imagine this ending happening after some great, destructive plot twist or long-kept secret has been revealed to the narrator and/or reader. There is shock and awe and maybe some betrayal. This is where you fully feel the effects of what has changed, the beginning versus the end. And in this case, the end is not ideal.

Maybe the resolution’s scene has been set, but that’s not offering enough closure. How to tie up the loose end? A short (and I mean short) piece of dialogue. It usually involves a sense of resolve and acceptance, even if the resolution at hand is otherwise displeasing or harrowing. The gut-punch comes from that acceptance, that acknowledgment of what has been lost in the quest to fulfill their goals. Doesn’t always mean defeat or a pyrrhic victory, but all protagonists must lose things while trying to gain others. This is where that character and the reader feel the loss in the wake of a resolution. 

2. A Question and an Answer

This is a lot like #1, only there’s a different setup. Instead of a scene being laid out and then one line of dialogue, there are three components. The scene is set, a question is asked, then an answer is provided. The end. The question and answer usually revolve around the reflection of what has changed. A “what now?” for all intents and purposes. Can be used for a mysterious ending to a standalone or a setup for the next installment in a series.

It is worth noting that the answer does not always have to be dialogue. For example, a character could ask: “So this is what we have left?” and then a (brief) description is given of a ragtag crew that’s survived the whole story. Play around with it. 

3. The Full Circle

Original Character Day 3: Non-Romantic Relationship

Hey guys! I’m late as usual to @originalficfest ‘s event, but here’s my entry with Max and Azalea:

“Hey there!” Azalea said excitedly and took a seat across from her partner, resting her face in her hand and tapping her foot. She clearly made him nervous, judging from how his eyes followed the length of the pictureless and colorless white room, when the only spot of anything fun was her. She hated to admit that it was a little funny, watching him play with his hands and squirm in his seat. She had never really had that power over someone before, much less seem intimidating to them. But there was something endearing about this kid, she concluded, something that convinced her to be nice to him, just this once. For all she knew, he was new at this.

“So I’m Azalea. It’s wonderful to meet you, really it is. It stinks that we couldn’t meet in any time frame other than the five minutes before we meet our Heavenbounders, but oh well, I guess.” The boy looked at her with wide eyes, and it was then that she realized he didn’t just appear young, he was young.

“Hey…how old are you?” She tried to coax an answer out of him. It took him a second to organize himself, sitting back against the chair and breathing in once, deeply.

“I’m sorry, it’s just that this is sort of brand new to me? I really don’t know how all this works, and you seem really confident–”

“Oh Lordy, no!” Out of instinct, Azalea reached out to grab the kid’s hands but realized halfway through that she half expected the kid to pull away. Luckily he didn’t, though, and clasped her hands around his and flinched.

“Hey…hey, check this out,” She said, holding their hands up to the light, “We’re warm! How cool is that! When was the last time you’ve been warm!” Excitedly, she shot up from her seat, the chair making its way halfway across the room from getting hit with her calves. She looked down at the kid, expectant for an answer, but he just sighed. She felt bad about that, all of a sudden.

“That’s the point, Azalea. The last time I was warm was three years ago. I was…God, how old must I have been…eighteen? No, it was seventeen, on my graduation day. It hasn’t been so long at all.” Azalea bit the inside of her lip and knelt next to the kid on two knees, like she imagined an adult would do to a kid with a scraped knee.

“What’s your name, champ?”

“Maximus.”

“That’s a pretty far out name, you know. I’m gonna call you Maxxy from now on. It’s gonna be our thing, cool?” Maximus actually laughed.

“Yeah. Cool.” He looked up at Azalea rather than the floor, and upon seeing her face up close realized that he would have to ask about it eventually, and it seemed to become more obvious the more he stared at it.

“So…what happened to you, Maxxy? You seem like a keen guy, so what are you doing about to be someone’s chicken head?”

“…Chicken head?” He had to ask. It would have bothered him all day.

“You know, like a chicken head? When someone says ‘God I hate that chicken head, they really rub me wrong’?” Azalea sighed, but she was clearly amused.

“Forget it, it’s not from your time.”

“Then…when is your time?”

“More like when was. My time came on April 11, 1964. May I forever rest in peace.” She mockingly made a cross over herself, making Maximus laugh. That made her smile, but it faded when she saw where on her face she was looking.

“I’m sure you’re going to want to know how I got these scahhs?” She said dramatically with a Brooklyn accent and pointed at the gash that began at her right eyebrow and stopped near the left corner of her mouth.

“It…yeah, it may have crossed my mind,” Maximus shrugged, which made Azalea snort-laugh. This kid was shy, but only if he wanted to be. She could tell that he was one of those “smart but doesn’t like to admit it” people, and probably got invited to a lot of cool places.

“You know, you seem like an alright guy, Maximus. You come from the good place?” She pointed up to the ceiling, which for some reason made Maximus look up himself, even if there was nothing there.

“Yeah, I guess you could call it that.”

“I can tell from the hair. They don’t really give white, white hair like that to people like me, if you know what I mean.” Maximus froze and slowly shifted his hand to his head. He tried pulling down the longest piece so that it could come close to his eyes, and he nearly gasped when he saw it. His hair really was white, not like the dark waves that used to be there.

“Hey, don’t sweat it, okay? I like it, I think. It it suits you.” Maximus looked down the floor like he was self conscious about the new hair. Looking at Azalea’s long ebony hair made him feel bad, like he had done something wrong by looking the way he did when she was stuck with a dark, dirty mess. It almost felt like he was mocking her in some way, just because Heaven bleached his hair.

James Charles alters the portraits on American dollar bills, exchanging the original staid and solemn faces with those of famous pop culture icons. Sometimes Charles simply draws over the original portraits on the bills, giving the famous politico faces playful makeovers, while on others he completely replaces the original faces. In either case, the text at the bottom of every bill is also replaced with either the name of the new face or a quote or descriptive phrase.

The Bride of Frankenstein’s text reads “Runaway Bride” while Frankenstein’s Monster reads “Love Lorn.” And Willy Wonka’s bill reads “The Bossman” while an Oompa-Loompa on another bill reads “Working Class Stiff.”

These dollars were exhibited back in 2011 as part of the American Iconomics show at the Shooting Gallery in San Francisco.

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Dear you, I spent a long time thinking of things I would say to you if I ever had the chance. You want know something, I come up empty every time and I was disappointed with that. I always thought that there was so much more that I needed to say to you, to tell you. But the likely hood of us ever seeing each other again was so little that I accepted the fact that I would never be able to find the words and it wouldn’t matter. Dear you, It was you. I know it and you do to. We’ll never speak of it or to each other again but I realised something today. In that fleeting second we locked eyes I found the words. I don’t love you. I never did. Dear you, I was never in love with you. I just thought I was because thats what teen movies are made of, boy meets girl, girl doesn’t feel good enough, boy helps her to understand that she is and they fall in love go to prom and live happily ever after for a summer. But that wasn’t us, we weren’t a teen movie. We weren’t even a ‘we’. You and I didn’t work because you wanted someone to be at your beck and call and I wanted someone to want me. Dear you, I had convinced myself that you using me between other girls was okay because you always come back to me and that meant something, that I meant something to you. But it works both ways I came back to you, I could have said no, I could have shut you out but I didn’t. I came back to you every time not because I loved you, but because I was afraid that some else would treat me the same way you did. So Dear you, I’m done now, theses are the last words I will ever write about you. I doubt you’ll ever read them and thats okay, you probably wouldn’t know they were about you if you did. I think it was alway meant to end like this, you doing whatever you do and me doing this. We might lock eyes again one day and there’ll been an understanding instead of a mutual dismissal part of me might even look forward to that. And finally… Dear Myself, I’m sorry, we deserved so much more. I’ve learnt my lesson I’m sorry that it took me so long. But its over now and we can move on. No more holding out for him because he isn’t coming and we don’t want him to. We are beautiful and interesting and unique and one day we are going to find someone who we really do love. Writing prompt 67