Your surprise for jimin is finally revealed and…lived.
Word Count: 2860
You were stood around a table, with all the things you had collected spread out in front of you. Yoongi was on your left and Taehyung was on your right. You looked at the items and then at the boys. “Hey Tae, why don’t you do it instead?” His soft chuckle vibrated against your eardrums, your eyes never left the items that lay on the table but you could feel the soft pitiful smiles that were directed towards you. “You can do this Y/N. It’s not like he’s going to reject you.” Yoongi’s words seemed to echo, he was right. Jimin wasn’t going to say no. But that didn’t mean he was going to like the surprise you had planned for him. Hell, did you even like it?
You watch as Yoongi put the correct items into their designated bags. You didn’t realise how frantic your breathing was until you felt Taehyung’s hand on the small of your back. “What if he hates it all? What if he suddenly realised how lame I am and hates me forever?”
Genre : smut, body worship, slight dom/sub
Plot : When you tried to get intimate, he panicked and flew away. This time you want to know the truth.
Me and Jimin have been dating for four months now, everything was perfect except one thing… everytime i tried to get more intimate with him, he ran away, like literally. Is it me ? It can’t be, he tells me all the time how gorgeous I am and how my body looks so perfect. I know he’s attracted to me, I could feel it multiple times against my leg, or when I brushed it with my hand. I tried everything, waiting for him in sexy lingerie, going out of the shower with only a towel on, leaving the door open when I change, bending down as far as I could to pick up an object, even dancing sexily in the living room. But nothing, he always watched me for a minute and then go with a small smile. What if he’s asexual ? No he would have told me.
I’m getting tired of it, tonight I won’t give him the choice. I texted him saying I really wanted to see him quickly because I had a surprise for him. I knew he can’t resist me when i send a cute selfie so he said yes. I wore a long black silk bathrobe with a black lacy bra and matching thong underneath. I knew it was his favorite.
I finally heard the door unlocking.
- Hey baby, he said with a smile.
- I missed you so much… I whispered, biting my lip.
- So where is my surprise ?
He was so innocent it was actually cute.
- Just follow me.
I lead him to the bedroom while swaying my hips seductively.
- Sit on the bed baby. I said with a confidence I didn’t know I had.
He sat obediently, still looking at me with wide doe eyes. I straddled and began kissing him softly, he seemed surprised at first but responded to my kiss nonetheless. I started licking on his bottom lip demanding entry, he opened his mouth so our tongues could dance together. The kiss got heated, I reached out to take off his sweater but he stopped me.
- Jimin what’s the problem ? Do you not desire me ?
- Y/N it has nothing to do with you I swear…
- Then what is it ? I have the right to know.
He started fidgeting, clearly uncomfortable. I sat next to him and waited for his answer.
- It’s complicated….
- Go ahead Jimin.
He looked at me, his eyes were wet and his lips quivered.
- If’s just… you’re perfect and I’m just me. I don’t have abs anymore, my thighs aren’t as muscular as they used to be and I lost some arms too. Also I’m not that well endowed down there… everytime i look at you I feel like I don’t deserve to touch you. I knew you would be disappointed.
I was speechless, I never imagined he had such thoughts… my Jimin was still so insecure, it made my heart ached. I sat down next to him and took his hands in mine.
- Listen to me Park Jimin. You are beautiful, everything about you is perfect. I don’t care if you don’t have abs, or thighs or whatever. I’m not going to love you less. And i love because of who you are inside. I love how you’re so caring and compassionate, how you always put yourself second. I love how dedicated to your career you are, how much effort you put into everything you start . I love how you always ask how I feel, how you’re always there for me. There’s so much things I love about you, I could write a book.
He was blushing furiously now, trying to hide it with his sweater paws.
- Don’t hide yourself love… let me take care of you okay ?
He slightly nodded his head. I slowly pushed him backwards so that he could lay on the bed.
- See those lips ? They’re gorgeous, so kissable …
I said before biting his lower lip. He moaned softly. I continue licking his lips and sucking on them while sneaking my hand underneath his shirt. His skin was so soft, I could feel him tremble under my touch. I began pinching his nipple, he closed his eyes arching his back. So sensitive.
- The sweater needs to go, I want to see all of you.
- I’m not sure…
- Jimin, trust me okay.
I kissed his jaw, his neck while taking off his sweater. I took the time to look at him.
- You’re so beautiful Jiminie, your skin is so soft and pure. You have no idea how hot you are.
He blushed at my comment, trying to cover his body. I pushed his arms away and continue sucking on his neck leaving purple marks.
- Now everyone will know you’re mine.
I went down to his chest and started sucking on his nipples, making him moan loudly. I continued playing with them, loving how they hardened against my tongue. Now they were all erect and red from my ministrations. I loved how Jimin looked right now, his eyes closed and mouth slightly open, looking so inviting.
I licked his torso and cute tummy, altering between kisses and love bites. All mine.
When I arrived at his waistband I looked at him asking for permission. His eyes but dark filled with lust.
- Yes Y/N do whatever you want, I’m yours. He said breathing heavily.
I took off jeans, leaving him in his white underwear, he looked so innocent like this.
I could see a patch of pre cum on his boxer, I gave it a lick palming it through the thin layer of cotton. He shuddered.
- More please give me more. He asked in a whine.
- As you wish my baby.
I sled his boxer down his legs and let his member sprang free.
- See, all of you is gorgeous, I love your little cock, so hard for me.
I took it my hand, feeling how hot he was. I passed my thumb on the tip spreading the pre cum around it. He threw his head back, biting his lips.
- Don’t restrain yourself, I want to hear you.
I continued stoking him while kissing his inner thigh.
- Please I want your mouth. He begged.
- What do you mean honey, be precise.
- Put me in your mouth please.
I slowly licked the tip, his breathing started to quicken. I took the head in my mouth, savoring the taste of pre cum. I traced the big vein of his shaft with my tongue, loving the high pitch sounds I get from Jimin. I took him all in my mouth, beginning slow movements bobbing my head up and down. He groaned and whined thrusting his hips forward. I accelerated my pace, while gently grabbing his balls. I could feel his member throb against my tongue, he was going to cum soon. I stopped and stood up, opening my silk bathrobe to reveal the black lacy lingerie. He looked at me his eyes wide open.
- I can’t wait to have you inside me…
I took off my thong and positioned myself on top of him, his member at my entrance. I could feel my pussy adjust to his size slowly taking him whole.
- How do you feel baby ? Do you like the feeling of my walls squeezing your dick ?
- Yes yes I love it Y/N, move please !
I began bouncing up and down on his cock, loving his grunts and moans. I decided to change the position and went on all four, giving him a sexy off the shoulder look.
- Come fuck me Jiminie. I said while biting my lips.
He hesitated a bit before placing himself behind me. I could feel the tip brushed my pussy lips, I was so wet. Finally he entered me. His movements were slow like he was afraid he would break me.
- Come on Jimin, be rough let go I won’t break.
He started fucking me at an erratic pace. I let out a loud moan when he hit my g spot right on.
- You fuck me so good baby, harder please !
- I love you Y/N so much. He said between moans.
I went on my back and opened my legs for him, inviting him to come between them.
In one thrust he was inside, not even waiting for me to adjust anymore. We were both moaning and panting chasing our orgasms.
I could feel his member twitching inside of me, he was close.
- Baby don’t cum until I say you can okay ?
- Yes. I’ll try.
He kept hitting my sweet spot, I could feel my pussy tighten around him, a few more thrusts and I came with a loud moan.
He kept fucking though making me tremble from overstimulation. I knew he was containing himself for me so I went on my knees and took him inside my mouth, I sucked and licked, he looked so fucked out it was beautiful. A few more flicks of my tongue and he came in my mouth. I swallowed every drop of his cum before giving him a sweet kiss.
- See baby, you’re perfect. No need to be shy anymore okay ?
- Okay Y/N thank you. He said with a smile.
We stayed in bed cuddling with each other and fell asleep, his arms around my waist and his head in the crook of my neck.
Fic: Kane/Toews versus Seguin/Benn bromance competition
Here are over 4000 words from a fic I’m trying to write. It’s the Kazer versus Bennguin bromance competition idea I’ve mentioned in the past. Spoilers for the ending are included below, so don’t read past Day 16 if you want it to be a surprise. I’d love feedback about including more Tom Wilson/Mike Latta, and also let me know if you have other Kane/Toews or Benn/Seguin ideas you’d like to see included.
I know that I want to add more with their teammates (including reactions to the competition); I also want to add stuff from the All-Star weekend (most of this was written before that happened). Finally, I want to include more interactions between the couples beyond the competition aspect.
A couple of other things I’d like feedback about:
Would it be better to remove any mention of their girlfriends? I tend to write things based on real life, but do some readers prefer an AU where the girlfriends don’t exist? (I currently have three mentions of them.)
Is switching points of view too confusing? There probably isn’t a way to do it otherwise, though…
Patrick is getting ready for bed when he receives an unexpected text from Segs.
Tyler: remember the brownie bromance tweet I told u about?
Patrick: …i think?
T: how some fans put together all the pics of us and basically said we should be together?
P: oh yeah
T: something similar happened again
T: but youre involved
P: wtf r u saying someone wants us to bang? eww
T: haha no… so some fan on twitter sent me this link comparing nhl bromances, saying im copying u n tazer with my benn bromance
T: but i was thinking we totally should lol
P: what do u mean?
T: it would blow their fucking minds if we did try to one up each other
T: cmon kaner whats the harm? it’ll be fun
P: id have to check with Jonny
T: you scared youd lose to us?? the big established bromance falling to the new guys?
P: fuck you, no,we’ll totally kick your asses. though what kinds of things did you have inmind? Jonny’s gf already thinks we’re banging. if we go too far she might breakup with him
T: and thats a
P: hahahahahaha good
T: great part of
jamie being single
P: okay, ill
convince Jonny. you start, we’ll do something to top it
T: kay dude
Segs post-game interview:
“Being traded to
Dallas was the best thing that could have happened to me, both professionally
“Personally? Could you
Tyler fakes getting
distracted, purposefully looking over and smiling at Jamie.
“Oh, uh, sorry,
thought Jamie was trying to get my attention for something. Isn’t he great? I’m
so glad I got the chance to work with him. Meeting at that All-Star Draft, who
would have thought three years later we’d be so close?” Tyler smirks,
licking his lips.
According to @88PKane he
knew even at 13 that Jonny would play an important role in his life.
Mark Lazerus @MarkLazerus
.@88PKane says: “I
knew, back in the Junior Flyers when we were 13, that Jonny would be
important to my life.” #TheyAreAdorable
Chris Kuc @ChrisKuc
Toews overhears as walks
past, says they talked about dreams of playing together in NHL during Junior
Flyers summer tournament #Blackhawks
Mark Lazerus @MarkLazerus
Toews: “We actually
talked about wanting to play on the same NHL team. We knew our chemistry at 13
would only grow.” #TheyAreAdorable
HOLY FUCK HOLY FUCK they
ship themselves more than anyone!!!!!!
#kazer #Patrick Kane
#Jonathan Toews #everyone ships them #but not more than #they ship themselves
He was just thinking what a really wonderful day it had been. Although he loved being “Sam” and felt a great honor as the Grand Marshal, as always there was that part of him that needed to step back. He was ready for some quiet time and a good Scotch.
The NYC crowd had been huge, noisy, and in a party mood. He was torn between sadness at the parade’s end and a bit of relief that it was behind him. But he knew he would always treasure this day. As he stepped off the ladder of the coach, she stepped into view. His eyes widened and his breath caught in his chest.
She was the most beautiful little girl he had ever seen.
There seemed to be an aura of joy around her. She was wearing black tights and black patent leather shoes with a navy dress peeking below a beautiful Lindsay tartan double breasted coat, the blue of the pink-purple, green and blue material setting off her sky blue eyes. Her matching tam with a fuzzy pom-pom on top only partially held back her dark curls. Her hair was as curly as Sam’s and the misty weather wasn’t helping.
The cold had pinked her cheeks and nose and the bright coat along with her dark hair made her creamy skin glow…or maybe that was just her natural state. She was beaming with a big smile, a wee dimple in her left cheek. To complete the outfit, she wore dark blue gloves and a little silver charm bracelet. Who knew they made leather gloves that small? Sam was completely taken aback at such presence in someone so small. The little girl, who couldn’t have been more than four years old, stepped forward and extended her hand for a shake. He knelt down and gently shook her hand, both of his large hands engulfing her tiny one.
She said, “My name is Emily. I just want you to know you are my mom’s Jamie and you do a great job. I don’t want anything. She just wanted me to say ‘hi’ for her.” It was only then that he noticed the iPhone in her other hand – and her mom several feet behind her. Mom looked ecstatic and he imagined she knew he could never resist such a little charmer.
Sam said, “Well it is certainly a pleasure to meet you, Emily! ‘Hi’ right back to your mom.“
Then leaning closer, "I’m glad I can make your mom happy because that probably makes you happy!”
“You’re right! It does!” Emily said with a giggle. “Oh hey, Mr. Sam?”
“If I could get a selfie with you, my mom said she would take me for ice cream - and I’m really wanting some strawberry! Will you take one with me?”
“Of course! So long as we can take one with my phone as well. You’ll be one of my favorite memories of today.” Emily looked surprised, then proud as she posed with Mr. Sam.
Sam smiled, took the pictures and received the best little-girl-hug-around-the-neck he could ever remember. He waved goodbye to Emily and her mom. He was so touched, he stepped back inside the coach for a moment of privacy.
Caitriona laid down her book, stood, and stretched to rival Eddie’s contortions after one of the cat’s long naps. Cait had "unplugged” after watching the parade and would only check the phone for that one text tone. She crossed to the table, retrieved her phone, and opened her text, grinning at the picture. Everyone loves him, she thought, with a small shake of her head. Then her vision clouded as a tear formed and slowly escaped down her cheek, over her widening smile, while she listened to Sam’s voice-text:
“This, Darlin’. This is what it’s all about. Don’t ye think she’ll look like this wee lassie? I can’t wait! In fact, I think we should get started on this dream straightaway. Be there in 15.”
Guess who I met at Canada House? I asked for a selfie and he said yes of course and hugged him and told I hope he enjoys London and oh my goodness… he’s beautiful and sweet and I cannot believe I met Justin Trudeau!
My Adventure in PAX East (a.k.a. The Day I Met My Heroes)
As you all may know, I went to PAX East today. I ended up buying a badge off of someone outside the convention center, and thankfully, that gave me access to the convention and all its wonders. I was amazed at the scope of that building; throughout the course of the day, I feel like I walked the equivalent of at least five miles just to get from one place to the next. But, I digress… (Full story below. Be warned… it’s a long one!)