Wren and Melissa and Jason deserved so much better. The NAT club storyline deserved better. Charlotte should have been talked about more. I’d actually have rather had the storyline linked to Wren and Marion and Radley/ Red Coat/ Eddie Lamb/ even the NAT club. I really liked the Twin theory, but not in the way they’ve decided to write it. Her reason why just isn’t good enough for me. 😶😩😣

Wow… I thought that was terrible, I’m actually pretty shocked. I love Troian but I couldn’t take Alex seriously because her accent was so bad. There are so many things that don’t make sense and I didn’t really see that as a happy ending for Mona either. Surely Mona still having mental health problems severe enough to keep people locked away isn’t true happiness, being part of the group is what she’s always wanted. None of this links back to the start, black widow and red coat are still Sara Harvey, none of the previous plot holes from the Charlotte reveal have been fixed and this whole thing feels like a bit of a joke tbh.
Well and truly gutted.

I love the journal reviewers and professors I’ve had over the years, but nothing feels as amazing as getting a paper back just coated in red pen, like, yes! I am so starved for proper editing after years and years in a “hard-science” discipline! Give to me your thoughts about em-dashes and word use and flow!

wrote-this-poem-just-to-burn-it  asked:

John 19 :))))))

19. have them being lied to before dying. (thinking they’ve been betrayed; thinking they weren’t loved; thinking they’ve lost their loved ones, etc)

This is gonna be so flipping short cause I suck but-

John laid there on the ground, clutching his chest as red blossomed from the center, warm blood seeping over the fingers that desperately clawed at the wound. John kept trying to breathe, to fill his lungs with air, but he gasped fruitlessly as the air never came. His head was starting to spin, his vision blurry, as he watches fellow soldiers be slaughtered next to him; men shot off horses, boys stabbed in the throats and made to suffer a slow and agonizing death by the red coats.

John reached for his gun that he had lost in the fall, stretching so far his fingers were brushing against the hilt, then the gun goes flying across the field several meters away. John let’s out a pained cry, desperation flooding every action as he ties to pull himself to the gun. A black boot comes down onto Johns arm hard and he lets out wail as he feels the bone crack within him.

“Come on, boy. Is that all you got? Not so tough now.” The British soldier above him mocked as he ground down the heel of his boot harder, causing another scream to be torn from his throat. “Pathetic.”

John tries to grab the soldier with his good arm but the soldier merely sides steps the lane attack, laughing as the young man continues to fight.

“How sad, little man doesn’t know when to quit. How does it know your death will forever be in vain. You lost the war boy, you died for nothing.” John felt fear strike within him, that couldn’t be right, the tides had surely turned, he was lying. “General Washington and all his men are dead, you traitorous son of a whore will burn in hell with the rest of them.”

“No…” John could feel the darkness again play at the edge of his vision, the heat seeping out of the hole in his chest. Lafayette… Hamilton… they were dead, they had lost the war… so many innocent lives will be killed because they could not win. The soldier chuckled darkly, moving the gun from his shoulder into his hands and held it with a fire grip. John watched as the soldier above him raised the bayonet above his head, aiming the knife above his throat. John closed his eyes and waited.

PLL Finale Checklist

I thought it’d be fun to list my final guesses, predictions, etc. for the finale and then cross out everything I’ve gotten right. So here goes:

- (RIGHT) Twincer is AD.
- (WRONG) There really isn’t a Twincer. It was Melissa in a mask all along.
- (WRONG) Melissa was hired/blackmailed by the ultimate villain aka the crazy psychopath Ezra Fitz, obsessed with writing the perfect story. Thus he created AD.
- (WRONG) What does AD stand for? Devil’s Advocate, the Latin phrase of it. (If AD’s the Devil Advocate, then Ezra is the Devil).
- (WRONG) Melissa is Bethany.
- (WRONG) Melissa was the real Black Widow.
- (WRONG) Charlotte was the real Red Coat. She only used Sara Harvey whenever she needed a decoy.
- (WRONG) Peter is still Melissa’s father. Her surrogate mother is Mary.
- (WRONG) Mary was forced to have the baby, just like Ali was.
- (WRONG) The girl in the grave is a random girl.
- (NOT ADDRESSED) Ezra paid NAT to take videos before.
- (WRONG) Ezra helped Charlotte steal the game. (If not AD)
- (WRONG) Why would AD care about Charlotte’s death? They probably wanted to restart the game with her. But she died, so…
- (WRONG) Who will die? Mona and AD.
- (RIGHT) Wren is Team AD.
- (RIGHT) Who’s Wren gonna shoot? Had to shoot either Spencer or Twincer.
- (WRONG) Who’s the Emison baby daddy? Ezra Fitz.
- (WRONG) Why can’t Aria marry Ezra? Because he’s Emison’s baby daddy.
- (RIGHT) Mary Drake isn’t as good as we think, she works for AD.
- (WRONG) Toby is playing double agent, think he’s working for Spencer when it’s actually Twincer.
- (RIGHT) Toby would be the one to identify Twincer.
- The snow thing was just Mona’s imagination of how she saved the girls.
- (NOT ADDRESSED) Lucas definitely knew Charlotte during her transition. He’s Team AD.
- (WRONG) Jason will appear, contrary to what Marlene said, and though he won’t be relevant to the mystery now, I bet he’ll answer some of our old questions.
- (NOT ADDRESSED) Sara Harvey was just a random girl pulled into this mess. Don’t think she’d be explained.
- (WRONG) The full circle moment would be an A ending. (Preferably, Ezra going into his lair. Remember what Marlene said about the myth of Rosewood going on? It’s because the story maker is still there.)
- (WRONT) Ezra never gets caught.

Will add more before the finale begins~

we can all agree that if you didn’t realize that Marlene wasn’t fucking up Pretty Little Liars from the middle of season 4, then you have played yourself. it was a solid show until they started going completely down the road they shouldn’t have. mona was original A, cece was Red Coat, and wren was supposed to be uber A. bye. i’m glad i don’t have to see that trash show on my dash anymore.

why are you doing this marlene??

there are so many freaking clues to spencer having a twin but I just don´t want it to happen because it´s too obvious and boring. Like come on shock me, don´t expect me to be happy because AD wanted to live spencers life

Marlene went from making sarah - miss nobody red coat and black widow to showing us twincer and making it so obvious and easy for us..

like come on king what the fuck? we don´t deserve this..not after watching pll for 7 long years

Read this if you were at Dodie's London show on the 18th

Hello! I’m really hoping I can find this beautiful girl I saw at the concert? If you are reading this and did go to Dodie’s o2 Islington concert in London did you look like this?
-A bright red duffle coat
-Hoop earrings
-Incredibly long eyelashes with just mascara, not eyeliner??
-Do you also have a bob cut (maybe just below your jawline?) which is light-dark brown and wavy?
Also I think that you were with a friend and an adult (parent?)
If you maybe are that beautiful human, I was the girl a short way ahead of you in the queue with a straight bob cut and wearing a dark denim jacket, with the sleeves rolled up, and a faded blue a white thinly striped scarf, light blue jeans, that were rolled slightly at the bottom, and black and pink Nike trainers. I was with a friend with auburn-ish hair and she wore an oversized denim jacket and a Troye Sivan “Fireproof” sweater with ripped black jeans. She had dark eye makeup and crimped hair. We were with her dad who is bald and very tall he was wearing a black hoodie. I also kept turning around and looking at you because you were literally so beautiful I couldn’t help it and you also saw me look at you like more than twice :D
If you do vaguely remember me then text me because I regret not talking to you because I am a small bundle of social anxiety :))

((Also if you are not this girl, would you mind sharing because I would really like to make contact with her as I’m lowkey in love with her?? )) xx

the highlights of the nrk party:

- carl insisting henrik takes off the red coat
- drunk!tarjei and laila singing
- henrik telling tarjei to look into the camera
- tarjei and marlon holding hands while dancing
- ulrikke doing a split on stage
- the cast collectively dancing to fy faen
- the blooper where julie had to tell tarjei and henrik to stop kissing
- the cast cheering when iman came on stage
- siv calling tarjei her son-in-law
- drunk and happy cast having fun together

Wren’s final twist: He is going to kill Ezra | Theory

It’s a long post with theories/proofs of why Wren is in the A Team. If you only want to read the Ezra’s death part, go after 6th point.

Theory video:

1. Marlene said that Wren will be part of the final twist of the show, so he’ll be related to AD’s plot or Charlotte’s murderer. Obviously he’s not AD but knows him/her & helps.
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2. Wren has always been part of the A Team. He knew Charlotte very well and he was the one who let Charlotte escape Radley to play the game outside being Cece. He worked there so he knew her real name wasn’t Cece. 

3. The famous drawing of that family with a woman in a red coat. He didn’t drew it, my bet is on Bethany. Also, the farm concept is important in the series: Andrew’s family farm, the stables where Jessica went with Bethany, Mellisa went there too…

4. My bet is he’s the son of Byron’s brother, Scott Montgomery. Byron mentioned his brother had mental problems and Wren mentioned his father also had them. I don’t think he’s Mary’s son because the plot of two family-related person having a relationship again…… His mother is british and he lived with her until he went to Rosewood to work in Radley so he could be with his dad. All of that before Alison’s dissapparence. While working there, he met Charlotte and they became closer and closer until being best friends or lovers. He also met Bethany and Mona. 

5. Wren helped Mona and Charlotte with the game (no, Charlotte never stole the game, Mona shared it and helped her). Wren was a big help since he could go outside everyday/anytime. Wren became closer to Melissa at the beggining of the series so he could knew everything about the girls. Making Spencer fall in love with him was part of the game. In season 4, Spencer was with Toby so he used Hanna. Wren’s in the A Team because he want to know who killed Charlotte and teamed up with AD.

6. In 4x10 ‘The Mirror Has Three Faces’, Hanna meets with Wren because she wants him to help her get into Radley to talk with Cece. Wren doesn’t want her to do it and says he’ll try. She leaves and someone calls him. That person is not A (Charlotte), it’s AD! (I’m doing a theory about his identity. Yes, HIS). AD has to take care of Hanna and the girls being near Radley/Cece and Wren has to do the same but INSIDE Radley.


In 7x15 we see Spencer introducing Wren to Ezra because she thinks they’ve never met before and I think she’s right. They didn’t met before, in person. But you could tell by Ezra’s face that he knew him. And Wren knew him too.

Actually, in Ezra’s lair (in Ravenswood) there’s a picture of Wren (and Spencer?) with a note that says “Wren in Radley”. Ezra knew him and investigated him.

And since he investigated him, he knows that Wren being there isn’t good news. That’s why he doesn’t go to Nicole’s, because he wants to know what’s Wren doing in Rosewood.

Wren also knows that Ezra suspects something and he’ll be watching his movements.

Ezra will find something big and important about Wren, he’ll find Wren’s in the A Team, that he was closer to Charlotte and he wants revenge. And Wren will knew Ezra found out everything so he’ll appear after Ezria’s wedding and will kill Ezra.

In 7B promo, we can see a person with shaved head with a gun. And we see Aria opening a door. 

In both pictures you can see that the doors have the same pattern and frame. 
Wren will kill Ezra before or after he tells everything. And why I know he’ll die?

If you zoom this picture and focus on Aria’s hands, you can see a ring in the marriage finger. Also, they’re on a cemetery.

That’s the same scene. Alisons’ wearing the black blazer. You can also see some graves behind her. And in the picture of the five girls, the way the girls look at Aria…This has “Ezra’s death” vibes everywhere.

And finally….

‘Till Death Do Us Part’ with a black rose….That means one of the liars will have death around her. That liar is Aria.


Another proof? The blood. 

What do you think about it?