the scene i mean

Seeing Jemma killing Fitz got me blank.

If it was just a normal killing scene I would have been sad bc they love each other, but it wouldd have been “okay”.

But instead she stabbed his chest eight times like a psychopath and when he tried to call her using his appearance, she cut his throat. 

THAT WAS FUCKING VIOLENT. AND FOR FUCK’S SAKE EVEN IF YOU KNOW IT’S AN EVIL ROBOT BEING ABLE TO STAB EIGHT TIIIIIMES SOMETHING WHO LOOKS AND SOUNDS EXACTLY LIKE THE PERSON YOU LOVE… Jemma… You’re one of the braviest character I ever knew.

Guys!! I just watched SHIELD! WHY DO I HAVE TO GO TO WORK?!?!?!?!

It’s so unfair because I have So. Many. Feels!!!!

I mean…the Skimmons. All the beautiful Skimmons. My heart. I can’t handle it.

But also…I just felt like…

Daisy: “I love you, Simmons.”

Jemma: “What?”

Daisy: “I said I love Fitzsimmons…you guys are meant to be.”

I mean is that not how that scene went down? I’m just saying!!

anonymous asked:

i was looking back at your advice for dialogue and i think including ums and uhs are too stilting when it comes to writing books

//I don’t think I managed to convey what I meant, but I didn’t mean making your entire dialogue scenes a fumbling mess of filler words. 

“Um, how was your day?” 

“Pretty good.”

“Oh, uh, that’s good.”

The example above is realistic, but it’s boring. The last thing you want to do is bore your readers. If you’re going to include filler words, at least move the conversation along.

“I think that I might have, uh, done something really bad.”

“What do you mean?”

“Just don’t look in the kitchen, okay?”

Use filler words sparing, like the above example, because that way things flow. Even tell instead of showing:

After a few tries, they finally managed to say, “It wasn’t me.”

or

“I can’t believe this,” they stuttered out, hesitantly. 

I hope that helps with what I meant about filler words? It makes things realistic, but overdoing things is a no go, y’know?

anonymous asked:

Ever notice how KL shippers sometimes steal canon material from SK

Y E S and i hate it so much because they’re admitting that yes, s/k scenes can be seen as romantic but because it’s not their ship they hate it and then they go and take scenes and lines between sk and apply it to their ship i mean i know kl has no scenes that can be seen as romantic but don’t take things from a ship you constantly bash for your ship like????? 

(shadowhunters season 2 episode 8 spoilers)

ok i’m really upset that we didn’t get a proper resolving scene after the rooftop one??? I mean the halluncinations were based off each charcaters insercuities and alec’s was bad enough to push him over the edge (literally ahah i should not be joking about this, this is serious). But like ok magnus saves alec after hE LITERALLY MADE A CONCIOUS DECISION TO FALL and everyone rushes to him but then it’s straight back to fighting and finding the warlock chick and I just feel that’s it’s really important that we get a scene where SOMEONE talks to alec about his obviously terrible mental state? Like we get that twenty second scene with clary but there’s no “are you ok?” or “I’m worried” or anything the main focus is on clary and yes I still think that was important and she explained to alec that none of that was true BUT LOOK AT HIS FACE HE STILL BLAMES HIMSELF and i just have a lot of feelings about this episode ok and next episode someone better talk to alec about his mental health because he literally tried to kill himself and I’m not ok.

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you learn to play the straight man, your lines become routine, never really saying what you MEAN, but i know the scene will change, white picket fences and a dog, a trophy bride and children, god, i know that’s what he WANTS, but jason what role do i play??? am i a savior or a phaaaaase am i here to damn you or to help you navigate this MAZE

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[Insp] from Brooklyn Nine-Nine. Original here