My advice when folks are struggling with writing in the third-person omniscient is
to Lemony Snicket it up. Give your omniscient narrator strong opinions
about what’s going on. Don’t fall into the trap of assuming that the
third-person omniscient perspective must also use the objective voice;
those are two separate things, and many of the most popular and successful writers who’ve written in the third-person omniscient do not, in fact, use the objective voice.
Hello Shysta, it's Caddy - just a quick message since I'm on my way out somewhere, but I was wondering if I could commission an arrangement for a friend who's in the hospital. Something simple but colorful would be great - and there's no rush to get back to me. Hope things are going well!