Another request! Thank you anon!

Luditor, The Party Tree Splicemon: Although it’s three heads all think independently, this Splicemon is never far away from a festival. When the leaves on top of it’s head begin to shake, they secrete an inoxicating pheromone lulling all those nearby into a befuddled stupor.

I found it hard to decide which variation I liked better, as you can tell. I’d like to know anything I could improve on. Hope you have fun on your summer vacation!

Splicing blog: Splicemon

Danke! But due to this summer school, I’m not gonna be doing critiques for anyone now (unless I end up having a lot of free time, which I shouldn’t). If i remember, I might do them when I get back.