Your writing flow is sooo smooth like omg. Every time I write, most of them turned very awkward and cringey. I feel like I constantly repeat my point and some scenes are so exaggeratedly written. Do you have any advice on how to write simpler? If that makes sense, thank youu
My advice is edit. You write your story, regardless of how many times you repeat your point or how you write it, and then when you edit you go through and cut the unnecessary stuff if a simpler style is what you want. It’s great if you can see that you repeat your point, because then you know when to cut it and can begin pinpointing what you need to change. First drafts, even second drafts, are awkward and cringey. That’s completely fine, that’s normal, and it doesn’t mean you’re a bad writer. Good writing is all about what you do with it after you’ve written it.
There are all sorts of tips and resources out there for how to edit your work which should be able to help you. But check if you’re using lots of words, or phrases the same - change them, or, if they don’t add to the plot of reveal character, change them to something that does. You can also repeat on a scene level with themes, which can give the feeling of exaggerating writing. In that case, think of something else that might advance the plot or show something else that you want to tell about your characters.
Repetition wise - three is strong, but more weakens rather than strengthens your point. Also only repeat the important stuff. You don’t need to focus on the things that aren’t relevant to your plot, it’s like if a movie zooms in on a book you expect that book to be important later. Same thing with writing. You want to give the most time to the most important things, regardless of how excited you are about any obscure research you’ve done etc.