I've always been curious: what did you originally write in whms that you later changed bc your beta didn't like it? Like what was the plot or w/e?
i was focused too much on the slow burn and didn’t even make them friends. they were just awkward and unkind to each other for like 12 chapters, there wasn’t enough detail, it felt rushed. i also was trying really hard to make it completely accurate to real life until charlotte was like “you’re never gonna finish this if you make every little detail real” and that piece of advice made it a lot easier to write it.