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anonymous asked:

Hi! :) I have some problem when writing, not in dialogues, those are the easiest part for me, but like after the dialogues, I always feel like I'm repeating the entence "she said" or "he said" wayyy too many freaking times, and it bothers me a lot. How do I kinda replace the word "say" and not make it appear 500 times in my 1000 word story? xD Thanks! And I cant wait for your novel to release :D

Hello my dear (fyi, this answer is scheduled for posting on my author website tomorrow morning as well as one of my weekly writing tips!)

Ohhh, dialogue tags. What an important question!!

Two things: the first is, check out this cool page about other words you can use for “said.” Remember that you probably want to convey action and emotion with your dialogue. The only thing “said” tells us is, literally, that someone… well, said something: which, mind you, is important!

But, other words – that more directly describe the way something is being said – can often be super helpful, and that’s where the link above can be very nifty.

The second thing: remember that you don’t always need dialogue tags. The goal with good dialogue is to have everyone communicate – as we all do in real life – with different cadences, with a voice all their own. So making sure your characters have their own rhythms and tendencies when speaking can help us as readers know who’s talking without necessarily having to be told. Relatedly, it’s fun to let readers see what characters are doing while they’re talking, and this can provide a lot of great alternatives to “said.”


Take this bit of dialogue, for example, from this delightful scene between true loves Emma Swan and Regina Mills in Once Upon a Time:

“How do you feel about kale salad?” Emma asks.

“Like someone found some place other than Granny’s for take-out,” Regina answers.

“I’m fine with her grilled cheese, but I know it gets to you,” Emma says.

“You eat like a child. Is that a root beer?” Regina asks.

“Two! I got you one. Thought you could use a break,” Emma says triumphantly.


Okay. Awesome. My heart is melted like that grilled cheese that Emma didn’t get because she knows it hurts Regina’s stomach be still my fangirl heart.

But, still. As written, it doesn’t convey everything that went on between them in that scene, does it? So, lets try it without once using “said”/”says” or synonyms for it.

“How do you feel about kale salad?”

Regina doesn’t bother looking up, either at the salad or at the woman who’d placed it there. “Like someone found some place other than Granny’s for take-out.”

Emma ignores her distant, distracted quip as she struggles to crack open the bottles she brought with her.

“I’m fine with her grilled cheese, but I know it gets to you.”

Regina scoffs with soft eyes and finally glances up. “You eat like a child.”

She pauses, then, and nearly gasps, her mask of disinterest finally gone. “Is that a root beer?”

“Two!” Emma quirks a small grin, holding up one bottle in each hand like she’s Henry, trying to be casual while proudly presenting his science fair project. “I got you one. Thought you could use a break.”

You see what I mean?

More melty-grilled cheese for Emma and warm fuzzy someone-notices-what-I-need feels for Regina, and more overall feels for us.

Sometimes, we need those actions, those facial expressions. And, it does two things at once: injects deeper forms of communication into the scene, and eliminates that pesky “said” repetition.

Remember, most of communication is held within the unspoken: don’t be afraid to put that in your writing!!

Have a great time, dear writer: you got this :)

Damian Wayne/Robin X Reader- The Next Bruce Lee (Part 5)

The Next Bruce Lee, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4

Guess who’s back, back, back, back again!  I’m refreshed and ready to get back in the writing game.  Thank you guys so much for being patient, I was going cuckoo for cocoa puffs this week and I needed a few days.  I’ll try to go back on my usual posting schedule, but it’s going to take awhile to get back to normal.

Warning: Swearing, death threats, medical terms/stuff that I don’t know if I wrote correctly or not, mentions of mmuuurrrrddeeerrrr

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anonymous asked:

Can I ask if you have an upload schedule for your nsfw blog?

I am not a person who follow schedules to post my art. I draw and then I post and that’s it haha but I intend to draw one nsfw per week maybe. It’s up to my inspiration x) I don’t know when I’m going to post the next one, it’s a surprise for all of us!

CSBB Reminders

Just a few reminders as August approaches!

Authors: If you did not send us a 100% complete first draft, please be sure to send us your completed draft ASAP! Please do not wait until the final deadline!

Regardless of the completeness of your draft, you should be revising and polishing your story! Expand and cut content, check for typos and errors, fix plot holes, and edit any inconsistent characterization. Basically, we’ve got time to take your excellent stories and make them even better!

We’re almost done with the posting schedule; we’re just waiting to hear back from a few people. Please get in touch with us!

Beta-readers: It’s your time to shine! Please let us know if you haven’t gotten a draft from your author(s)!

Artists: You should be hard at work on your artwork! Please remember the minimum artwork requirements (available here); some of you are exempt from the minimum (you know who you are!).

You should absolutely be in touch with your author or authors as you finish your artwork! Communication is key here!

Once we have the author posting schedule finalized, we’ll be in touch with you about the schedule. Look for an email over the next few days!

Authors and artists: August 15th is the final deadline for finished stories and artwork. It must be emailed to us by the end of the day, so if you can send it in early, we’d appreciate it! More details to come, but the important thing here is that this deadline is not flexible!

As usual, please let us know if you have any questions!

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-Remember when we first met, and you took me racecar driving? 

-I remember how terrified you were.

-I was not! Anyway, what I remember most was how relieved I felt.

-Relieved?

-Yeah. My whole life, I was always told I was too wild, too emotional, too intense, but it turned out you could be just as intense as me. I’ve never had anyone in my life who got me the way you do.

Turf Wars, Part 1

Today is International Romani Day. 

The Romani are a widely-dispersed ethnic group that lives mostly throughout Europe and the Americas. They face prejudice and bigotry in many nations, much of it government-sanctioned. They were one of the primary groups targeted for genocide by the Nazis

Though many Americans are unaware, the word “gypsy” is a racial slur. Dressing up “as a gypsy” is not appropriate, even in a fantasy setting or for a Renaissance fair. Using the word if you are not actually Romani is not permissible.