*Doesn't capitalize something that is supposed to be capitalized in a fanfic*
Nope! That's it! I used to like you, but now you have TOTALLY lost my trust. I mean, your plot is great, everyone is in character, it is the correct point of view, you're a nice person, but you didn't capitalize a name. We. Are. Over.
<b><p></b> <b>Laff:</b> ladies, my accent is cute, no?<p/><b></b> *Ladies giggle*<p/><b>H.M:</b> ladies, unlike him I'm not fashion blind<p/><b></b> *Ladies giggle*<p/><b>One girl:</b> what about him<p/><b></b> *Points to John who's ordering drinks*<p/><b>Hamilton:</b> *way too loudly* HES MINE HANDS OFF!!<p/><b></b> *At bar, John is bright red*<p/><b>John:</b> maybe I'll have a pint extra Sam Adams<p/></p><p/></p>