rukarukaillusionist replied to your post: Get a review on fanfiction I wrote, person complains it was too steamy during the love scenes.

Well, that’s a new one.

I know….I was wondering for a moment if they were trolling but then they did a relatively long response so I mean..I guess it was serious. They said they skimmed over the steamy bits and I didn’t need to focus so much in the “details” of the sex.

I thought I did a good job of not using any of the no-no words.