readable style

Tips for Illustrators (and other artists too!)

I’m an illustration major at MICA (please check out my blog here as a way to support me for making this post!), so this is catered towards what I learned in my illustration critiques and from professional illustrators. I think these tips can go for other artists too, though!

None of these are things that work all the time, but they’re general “rules” I’ve been taught. You can break them, just know why you’re doing so! These are just things I copied from my critique notes, so most are general tips I’ve heard and copied down.


  • Enjoy what you’re working on, but be okay with changing it.
  • Anatomy, and accurately trying to portray it, is really important.
  • Time and space can be portrayed through focus and distance.
  • When working digitally, make some of your own textures (traditionally) and scan them in. Adding them into a picture adds an element of your own hand and makes your work stand apart from other digital work.
  • Contrast is a great thing.
  • Saturation is a great thing, especially in watercolor (soak that brush with pigment!).
  • Your style should never draw an obscene amount of attention to itself; it should just work fluidly.
  • Consider what medium(s) work best for your idea.
  • Cover your paint palettes (particularly reusable ones) to make sure dust doesn’t get in the paints.
  • Spin the page when you’re working. The time is takes to do that will show some major improvement in your art!
  • Use dark watercolor and then a light colored pencil on top, never the other way around (it will look muddy and ruin clarity).
  • Make sure to sometime pin or place you piece far away and step away so you can see the whole composition (or zoom out a lot digitally).
  • Consider the genre and audience of what you’re working for (and if it’s yourself, then you’re your own audience!).
  • Illustration is a branch of fine art, don’t forget that.
  • Fantasy art usually needs a lot of high detail.


  • Pick an overall color palette to work in, then add in other colors as needed.
  • Complementary colors (ones opposite on the color wheel), when placed next to each other, can pop an object forward or draw attention to it. (Think of a red ornament on a green Christmas tree).
  • Designate the shadows to be either warm or cool, and the highlights to be the opposite. Stay with this throughout the entire picture.
  • All colors have a warm and a cool hue (cool and warm blues, cool and warm oranges).
  • The more saturated a color is, the more it will pop forward in the picture plane.
  • Don’t use colors right out of the paint tube.
  • When making a shadow, tint the color with the complementary tone (it makes it a little more grey).
  • Colorizing backgrounds lines makes them recede in a colored image with line art.
  • Blue and pink tones are great for use in skin tones.
  • Flats need to be fairly differentiated colors.


  • The reference should never be an excuse for a misleading or awkward pose. You have the artistic license to alter an awkward pose and not just draw from a photo.
  • With scratchy or textured line art, find some places of solid black too, to allow the eye to rest (or where you want something to pop out).
  • How you render all the elements of the picture is what makes your own individual style.
  • When something is illuminated, it should be the brightest part of the composition.
  • Anything with a straight angle (like the corner of a room) has one wall/side being lighter in value than the other. There is a crisp distinction.
  • Sometimes adding more lessens the strength of the image.
  • Fabric folds are crisp, if they’re too soft they’ll look like clay.
  • Line heaviness and weight can determine depth.


  • Anatomical consistency is very important.
  • Inside of the mouth is usually dark.
  • Show character motivations with actions and poses.
  • You can crop a face or figure to set a mood.
  • In any and every picture, pay special and close attention to the hands, feet, and face.
  • Learning musculature, even if you use reference, will help you create the body you want for your character. Understand the human form…it’s easier to alter if you understand it in the first place.
  • To pop a figure forward, add a little bit of rim lighting (great with backlighting).


  • Avoid spots where a line or shape comes really close, but doesn’t cross, the edge of the paper. This is called a tangent and tangents are bad (they suck the eye into just that one spot and stop the composition).
  • Nothing in the picture is accidentally there, it is all drawn by you, so make sure everything has a conscious placement.
  • Don’t crop anything that shows essential character expression (including essential parts of the pose).
  • Never crop a figure at a joint (it makes the limb look amputated unintentionally).
  • Consider how you show detail with smaller characters…what are the essential characteristics?
  • Shapes of color or tone can make great framing devices.
  • For the most part, render the foreground with more clarity than the background…you want atmospheric perspective to be used to make it look like it’s receding.
  • Line heaviness/weight can combat (in a good way) any very dark areas.
  • When the character breaks a border (shape, line, panel etc), it shows dominance.
  • Make the shape of your negative space visually interesting.
  • “Cornerstops” are great. They are a compositional element that visually blocks your eye from running off the corner of a page.
  • Shadows can be a great compositional element.

Narrative Illustration (Portraying the narrative)

  • It is a successful illustration if the story is told.
  • Use every element of the image to tell the story.
  • Sometimes you have to take out elements you love for the sake of storytelling.
  • Think of images as being fast/slow, quiet/loud. What techniques portray these senses for you, and why are you using such techniques? What areas of the picture are slower and faster, why those areas?
  • Indicate how lavish or simple a place is by the details you choose to include in the background.
  • Don’t make it obvious that you “curated” the picture; it should look natural.
  • Cover illustrations don’t always need big and bold text, as long as there’s a strong narrative being portrayed.
  • Something mid action carries the narrative better than pre or post action.
  • You should be able to tell a story without relying on text.

Sequential Art (Comics, etc)

  • Color between panels can draw the eye around the page.
  • Big jumps in narrative can add humor and excitement, just make sure to think of why you are having the jump there.
  • When starting a sequence, make it obvious where you start (establishing shot; biggest to smallest, etc).
  • Make sure panels can read as separate images even if you took the gutter away.
  • Smaller panels are frequently used for faster/quicker actions.
  • Removing the background in certain panels allows the scene to be read faster; you only need one background per page (unless the scene in the background is changing).
  • Style, readability, and timing are key things to keep in mind.
  • Does the punch line/climax happen at the right time on the page?
  • Before planning a page, ask yourself: “How much time is elapsing between the first and last panel?”
  • Consider panel shape and size.
  • The composition, and where the eye flows inside every panel, informs where the eye travels to next…compositionally lead the eye from panel to panel.
  • The more panels you have, generally the more time goes on.
  • Don’t rely on speed/action lines to make things dramatic.
  • Give word bubbles a little breathing room.
  • When doing a graphic novel, you’ll usually have to redraw the first few pages since the characters will come more naturally to you by the end pages.
  • There is a design element to sound effects.

Digital Art (Mostly Photoshop based, but some are general tips)

  • Before printing, you usually want to switch your file to CMYK (though save a file in RGB too). Print at 300 dpi.
  • Before printing, you can up the brightness, saturation and contrast until it just starts to look awkward. You’ll learn the best settings for the printer you print at.
  • Don’t place digital textures anywhere. Consciously arrange them.
  • Don’t overrender. Digital art tends to be the most successful when it feels less digital than someone would expect.
  • If your color scheme doesn’t look cohesive, you can use a fill layer of one specific color to unify everything (Layer->fill layer). Lower the opacity to around 15-30%.

This is a song by us called Pompeii, which was sort of the song that I guess changed our lives. And it kind of did quite well in a lot of different places, which we weren’t expecting, and took us all over the world and allowed us to still have this as a job. (x)


Some things are forever broken.

(a little something i had on my mind -forgive the messiness, I just wanted to draw the outline of it, this is in no way a proper comic.)

Book Review

Hatsis, Thomas. The Witches’ Ointment: The Secret History of Psychedelic Magic. Rochester: Park Street Press, 2015.

If you’re looking for a book about the history of psychedelic magic that you simply cannot put down, look no further. I read this book in about two days. Hatsis’ writing is witty, engaging, and informative, and I never found it dull or difficult to wade through; and yet, despite its readability and entertaining style, it certainly is not fluff or “light” reading.

Hatsis makes a strong case for the historical existence of psyche-magical ointments used by folk healers in the medieval to early modern eras, and how these ointments became part of the witch stereotype perpetuated by the Church in its efforts to eradicate heresy. (Many authors have insisted that these ointments were fictional, merely another false accusation from hysterical clerics.) Hatsis’ documentation and mountain of primary sources is simply staggering, and the amount of information presented makes the bibliography alone worth the price of the book.

Even if you’re not interested in the poison path or veneficia, this book can still offer a fascinating study on the evolution of the European witch stereotype and how common folk have always leaned away from pure orthodoxy. I’d say it’s a must-read for anyone interested in European witchcraft.

Also, as an aside, the author’s alliterations are amusing, again attesting to his clever and enjoyable writing style.

good morning message to the one you love who lives in another part of the world

Hey. Just like the other day and the other more coming days, I won’t be there to touch your face and tell you how good my morning is because you’re with me; because obviously, I wasn’t there and you weren’t here. And what I hate the most is that, I don’t know whether it’s “good morning, my princess” or “good evening, love” because this fucking side of the world isn’t the place where I should be and I am certain that I am going to do everything, anything just to be there, with you.

(My body is made of soil where flowers grow and with every streak of the warm sunlight, I feel my body tremble in an overwhelming growth. But ever since I met you, love, every flower ceased to exist. I wake up and reach out to this seemingly large bed that was actually made to fit my frailty. My bed continues to grow bigger as the mornings without you outnumber the days we actually woke up beside each other. And, dear, I would give up anything, everything, just to feel your smile against my lips and have my fingers intertwined in your soft, raven hair.)

I asked the sun to kiss you when you wake up since I wasn’t there to do so. And love, do me a favor, write my name up on your ceiling, on your left and right wall so no matter where side you would open your eyes, my name will be your first thought because for sure, if I was there? I will hold you close against my chest so the moment you wake up; you got no choice but to think about me because I was really there.

(I heave a sigh before getting off my bed and reaching out for my pen and paper – the only confidant ever since I realized that my days can never be yours and your nights can never be mine. I write your name – over and over and over and over and over – beside my own name and wish upon the stars I see outside my window that the distance between us was just a dot on paper and not the nauseating expanse of ocean. I want to you wake up soft kisses on your shoulder but I can’t do such thing because all my lips can reach is your name. And I feel myself crumple every paper that has your name on it and prepare myself for a girl’s night out for it’s 7 in the evening for me and it’s 7 in the morning for you.)

And love, I want you to remember that if you feel like crying is the best thing to do in the morning, it’s okay to cry. Cry your heart out until you feel better. But, if you can find the little reasons to smile, go ahead and smile. I want you to also remember that no matter where I am right now, my hands are made to touch you and hold you, my lips are made to say your name before I go to sleep and when I wake up, my mind is made to think about you all the time and I am okay with that.

(My dearest, there are moments that I want to run to you, be with you, surprise you with an excited knock on your door. By then, you’ll have no choice but to welcome me into your arms. But, baby, I know it’s not as simple as that. When you’re sad, I can’t kiss your frown away. When you’re happy, I can’t personally witness how beautiful your smile is and pictures will never do it justice. When you’re scared, I can’t be there to hold your hand and give it a gentle squeeze. I can’t wrap my arms around you and hold you close from midnight to morning. And it pains me. Nonetheless, with my words of love, I want to assure you that I’ll never give up. I’ll never succumb to the loneliness in my nights. Because that’s how much I love you.)

My “good morning” will always be a “goodnight” and my “goodnight” will always be a “good morning” and it’s kind of funny how, but I am really contented with this complicated situation. As long as you’re there holding on, I think I am going to be okay all the time.

(Maybe we could exist in a world where fishes fly and birds swim. Maybe instead of sand on the shore, the stars can accompany the gentle lapping of water. Maybe butterflies can bloom instead of flowers. Maybe we could exist in a world that doesn’t make any sense and defies all rules of logic. Maybe by then, we’re on the same bed when we wake up and there’s no time difference that breaks both our hearts. But for now, I am contented of what we have. I am contented that I have you. I love you and any time difference can never take that love away.)

Good  morning, love.
Good night, baby.

Collaboration by: Franco (normal text) and Hysa (italicized text)


Janice Palmer-Carlsberg takes on the role of leader for the decimated rebel army of kids, and rallies the troops.

Today, they will take step two. And perhaps soon there shall be a step three. 

about writing styles

so you have decent technical writing skills and you like making stories!  but when you read other people’s stories, it seems like they use better words, their phrases flow better, their humor is smarter, their sensory details are more  vivid…all that jazz.

it is a great thing to take inspiration from other people’s writing and push yourself to improve because of them, but if you’re ever feeling frustrated because you feel like you’re just never going to have it all…  I mean, that’s okay.  I like all my favorite authors for totally different reasons!  some of them are poetic, some of them are sharp and funny, some of them put great effort and detail into their worldbuilding…and what one is lacking, another might have in spades!

what I’m getting at here is that there’s no one good, readable writing style.  yours may have an appeal you’re not seeing because it comes out of your brain.  so keep it up! ^u^

(this applies to art too, but I’ve been thinking about a lot it in terms of writing recently)