second of all, you have no i repeat NO reason to be self conscious of your smut writing!! it was getting me all sorts of hot and bothered, it was super sexy!!! and that is so hard to do. it is so hard to find well written smut. and you HIT IT RIGHT ON THE HEAD!! it was too good. the torture was just unbearable enough and the release was, well, amazing. sorry for not reading sooner 😉 you have serious talent sis. know this!!!