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"Hit By Destiny" by ocdmess


Three months ago, a traumatic incident changed Bella’s life forever. She became an outcast - hated by everyone, loved by no one. Wanting the torment to end, Bella hopes for nothing more than the end of her miserable life and when she gets hit by a shiny Volvo, she almost gets her wish fulfilled. Seriously injured, the young girl is brought to the hospital, where the man who hit her, turns out to be the only thing that keeps her breathing…
This fanfic is simply one of my favorites. It contains the douchiest Edward ever written: you’ll want to punch him in the freaking face, yet grow to love him nontheless. At least I did.Hit By Destiny is far from being one of the happy/easy-going fanfics that I usually read as it contains serious angst, dark themes and violence. And on top of that, it is one of the craziest fics I’ve come across. Let’s just say it has Bella’s bat-shit crazy mother, Renee, drinking her blood. A-huh…Yeah, I cringed, too when I read that. But, don’t worry - it’s an all human story, believe it or not. ;) Despite all that has happenend, it does have a happy ending which I’m totally grateful for.
Hit By Destiny consists of 59 chapters and a total of 463,685 words. The story is rated MA for, language, dark themes & violence.
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Hit by Destiny

Como todo fic que llega a mí, o debo decir la mayoría que llega, es gracias a la recomendación de alguien. Al principio estaba en duda si leerlo o no porque era en inglés y yo con ese idioma no me llevo bien. Pero una vez que leí el primer capítulo ya estaba en un viaje sin retorno porque era imperiosa la necesidad de saber qué pasaba y porqué.

Summary:

Hace tres meses algo le pasó a Bella que hizo que cambiara su vida para siempre. Ella es una marginada, odiada por todos, amada por nadie. Su deseo mas profundo es que su vida termine y casi lo logra cuando es atropellada por un Volvo brillante. Ella queda con graves heridas y la única cosa que la mantiene con vida es la persona que la atropelló…

Oh sí, pensé que era algo como que Edward pensaría cosas como “Oh atropellé a Bella y ahora la voy a amar por siempre aunque antes la odiaba” y Bella seria como “Ay! soy tan tímida pero me quiero morir por <inserte problema familiar tonto> y bla bla bla”.

No. Edward es un reverendo idiota por casi un poco mas de la mitad del fic. Una vez que la atropelló piensa tan solo en él y en nadie mas. En como se vería afectado él por el accidente. Además de llamarla Goose (Ganso) de forma despectiva y mencionarle un par de veces que cuando pasaba por encima con el auto a un pájaro no tenia porqué afectarle que hubiese pasado con él.

Bella, que ya venía con un problema serio, no le importo nada de eso, es más a pesar que los amigos de Edward habían cambiado la manera de tratarla después del accidente, prefería a Edward porque era la constante en su vida. No cambiaba (ella tiene un problema con los cambios de actitud de las personas por lo que le pasó) y es por eso que agradece que él no lo haya hecho y siga siendo el mismo imbécil, egocéntrico y playboy. 

En esas cosas de la vida, él y ella se hacen amigos. Bueno mas que nada se contienen porque ella no tiene a nadie y él tampoco. Ella le confiesa que le pasó y porqué sus deseos de morir y él queda en shock. Unos capítulos después se aman. Un poco mas adelante se vuelve todo negro y el final es feliz.

Lo que debo decir es que, a pesar de que la historia transcurre en Forks,  son adolescentes y van al instituto en donde Bella es la marginada y Edward es el rey, tiene de original el papel que juegan las leyendas Quileute. También quienes son los villanos de la historia.

En fin, si lo queres leer no te vas a arrepentir aunque se parece en partes a Y luego estas tu por la forma en que se ayudan Edward y Bella a salir a la vida es totalmente diferente y te quedas en cada final de capítulo queriendo saber mas.

Hit by Destiny y el perfil de su autora, ocdmess.

Adios!

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Hit by Destiny by ocdmess

I’m Edward fucking Cullen. I didn’t give a damn about Isabella Swan. I didn’t care about any of this shit…
Then why were you here?
I felt something crack inside me. It was too fucking much. The accident. All the fucking pressure… and now this. I couldn’t fucking lie to myself anymore. They had been right all along. I was going to break down, and it was going to be ugly.
‘Because I fucking changed…’

Hit By Destiny: A Playlist  songs for Hit by Destiny by ocdmess

  1. Remain Nameless – Florence + the Machine
  2. Homesick – Sleeping at Last 
  3. No Argument – Sleeping at Last
  4. In the Embers – Sleeping at Last 
  5. Demons – Imagine Dragons
  6. Leave my Body – Florence + the Machine 
  7. Misguided Ghosts – Paramore 
  8. We’re Still Here – Sleeping at Last 
  9. Silhouette – Sleeping at Last 
  10. Seven Devils – Florence + the Machine
  11. Turn it Off – Paramore
  12. You’ve Got the Love – Florence + the Machine 
  13. Aperture - Sleeping at Last
  14. Heavy in Your Arms – Florence + the Machine 

One fucking kiss and I crumbled. I’m addicted, Sparrow. I’m fucking addicted to you. You’re like my own personal brand of heroin. You’re stronger than I am… smarter… braver. You’re so fucking brave, Sparrow. And you’re so fucking beautiful without even knowing it. Everything about you is fucking beautiful. Your soul is beautiful. You are fucking beautiful.
—  Edward Cullen to Bella Swan in Hit By Destiny
This is the most important thing you can ever do to me. I don’t fucking care if you ever see a shrink, I don’t even care if you go completely insane and run around dressed in a pink tutu while singing songs in jibberish. As long as you have a pulse, as long as your heart keeps beating, you’re fucking mine. Okay? Keep your heart strong, because it’s all I want. I will love you even if you go insane.
—  Edward Cullen to Bella Swan in Hit By Destiny

I’m Edward fucking Cullen. I didn’t give a damn about Isabella Swan. I didn’t care about any of this shit…

Then why were you here?

I felt something crack inside me. It was too fucking much. The accident. All the fucking pressure… and now this. I couldn’t fucking lie to myself anymore. They had been right all along. I was going to break down, and it was going to be ugly.

‘Because I fucking changed…’

—  Edward Cullen in Hit By Destiny
It means that… people change, all the time, for no good reason… they love you, then they stab you… they hate you, then they wanna help you… but you, Edward… you’re the same all the time. And I like that. It’s nice having something constant to hold on to… even if it means being called a bird’s name every now and again… it’s the constant things in your life that keep you sane
—  Bella Swan in Hit By Destiny
‘Fucking everything. Whatever you want, you deserve it. So tell me, Sparrow, if you could choose anything in this fucked up world to have, what would that be?’
I smiled sadly at him, already knowing what I wanted. There was only one thing. There had always just been one thing. I always thought I would get it someday, but then Mom decided to cut me, turning my view of the world upside down and making me doubt everything I had ever known. And of course, effectively removing my will to even breathe anymore. There was only one thing.
‘I just want to be loved.’
—  Edward Cullen and Bella Swan from Hit by Destiny 

Something ached in me at the sound of her broken voice. This wasn’t Swan. Swan wasn’t supposed to sound so defeated. She wasn’t supposed to be broken. She was supposed to talk back and irritate me. She was supposed to be a waste of space. She was supposed to be nothing to me. Nothing but someone to annoy me.

At that moment, something changed.

As she lay there on the floor, looking up at me with those brown eyes, I knew she was not a waste of space. Someone so broken could never be. That thought was fucking disturbing, and it was something I would never admit out loud.

—  Edward Cullen in Hit By Destiny