So it’s been about a year since I first posted a rough draft of the first chapter for a story titled Lucid on fanfiction.net.
I didn’t want to start posting the story before I was done with it because I didn’t want to end up with an abandoned story, but I wanted to generate some responses.
Anyways, I’m still working on it, but I can feel my motivation start to wane, so I’d like to get some more feedback from a different audience than the few who responded on fanfiction.net.
This first chapter does have a lot of exposition and crap, of course, but the story does gain some more meat as it goes on; trust me on that.
So here you go. Please, please, please, tell me what you think.
Lucid Chapter 1
In a world where war looms just beyond the horizon, magic exists just beyond mortal sight, and the monarchy holds the power, Lucy just wants to escape her father’s manor. However, she fears what she can manage to do beyond her pampered life. Can the literal “man of her dreams” bring her the adventure she craves?
Rating: T Genre: Romance/Adventure Nalu-centered, with other ships coming in eventually