Preview for Lucid

Alright folks

So itโ€™s been about a year since I first posted a rough draft of the first chapter for a story titled Lucid on

I didnโ€™t want to start posting the story before I was done with it because I didnโ€™t want to end up with an abandoned story, but I wanted to generate some responses.

Anyways, Iโ€™m still working on it, but I can feel my motivation start to wane, so Iโ€™d like to get some more feedback from a different audience than the few who responded on

This first chapter does have a lot of exposition and crap, of course, but the story does gain some more meat as it goes on; trust me on that.

So here you go. Please, please, please, tell me what you think.

Lucid Chapter 1

In a world where war looms just beyond the horizon, magic exists just beyond mortal sight, and the monarchy holds the power, Lucy just wants to escape her fatherโ€™s manor. However, she fears what she can manage to do beyond her pampered life. Can the literalย โ€œman of her dreamsโ€ bring her the adventure she craves?

Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Adventure
Nalu-centered, with other ships coming in eventually

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