Poked at the shape a bit more. Muzzle is still annoying me! And now he looks a bit too lean I think?
Also a veeeery basic beginnings of the first coat. Think there’s going to be 5 or 6 or something? I remember black and white but not the other ones I was supposed to do >.> Yay for being organised.
Any way, if you want to be super special awesome and impart your GSD critique onto me, this is a wee form thing with the different points you can advise about. I’ve tagged the darlings who have been helping me so far but anyone is welcome to give an opinion, as much or as little as you like <3
Muzzle - width, length, taper/angle, curve of bridge, flew length, nose
Head - general shape/width/length, curve of skull, cheeks, eye shape and position
Body - neck, back length, depth of chest, stomach and tuck up, tail thickness and length
Legs - length and thickness - ETA please excuse the ugly skinny tail it’s so baaaaad xD
gothiccharmschool.tumbl… has a few of your beastlies and she has amusing little vignettes of them trying to steal her tea and biscuits. May be worth a follow if you want to see them. I think she may have about 6 or so now.
I know, I love her posts!! I reblog them all the time. :)