A collaboration between me and @varvau
This is the post-critique version of http://sinto619.tumblr.com/post/157285801382/a-collaboration-between-myself-and-varvau-story
After following the suggestions, the entire piece feels a lot more whole now. Losing the over exposed green fabric roofing between the opossum and the maned wolf now makes them the focal point. At the same time, it allowed the atmosphere to be more present and entire setting to pop out. That one over exposed fabric held almost all elements back and demanded attention.