This is awfully specific but I really like how you write the girls’ upbringing. With VM being very hands-on parents with them (obviously they would be), but also how they read books and play outside and such. Where I work, I see families all the time and parents will just give kids a tablet to distract them. Today I literally saw a baby with an iPhone. I’m not a grandma who frowns on tech or anything and I’m not shaming these people of course, but I like how you don’t have them doing that.
I didn’t intentionally write them that way, but I also did notice! It’s cause their parents aren’t too technologically savy (esp their father), so they didn’t grow up that way. But of course they still have a social media life later on, like Maddie with her instagram.