GABI!!! Seriously, I think I've mentioned this before like a gazillion times, but you are an amazing writer. The way you phrase things is like, perfect. It's like you have a never ending dictionary of words that are perfect for all your sentences.
GIRL, gah, I honestly feel like I’m crazy redundant and nowhere near as inventive as I should be with my language/word choice, so this is such amazing feedback to get? Seriously, I’m like beaming. It’s pretty nuts how much our own perceptions cloud our ability to see/read our own writing the way someone else might, so thanks so much for this, love.
PSA TO ALL WRITERS: YOU’RE PROBABLY YOUR OWN WORST CRITIC.
Coming to the chapter itself, Kai was every bit as adorable as I expected him to be, I want to hug him and shelter him and treat him like my child. Him being so anxious over not being able to take their coats, and then freaking out over the burnt swan… what a marshmallow, honestly! And Bonnie giving him advice was the best, she’s getting to know him, she’s learning that he’s not completely psychotic. I didn’t expect him to be gay (bi?) Either way, unexpected. Also, how big is his apartment?
AW, isn’t he the cutest little loon ever? I’ve got a lot of Kai feels coming up so I’m so, so happy you find him as endearing as I do, lmao. My headcanon is that he’s actually a bit younger than the rest of them, like fresh out of college, so he’s like their weirdo son that they’re teaching how to human. And yeah, Bonnie definitely got a glimpse of the more endearing side of him! There’ll be more of that coming up on Damon’s part in 16. And Kai’s totally pan in this fic. Like I just see him as having no preference or even a particularly strong concept of gender, it’s just whatever clicks! The funny part is he’s actually going to be awkward as all hell in any romantic situation so that’ll be fun to see later on, I think ;)