Hello! I’m new at writing and I want to write POC. Is there a way to write them without mentioning their skin color or origins? Mentioning traces that will lead the reader to just know they are? (Am I making sense?)
Because we live in a world where white media dominates, even in countries where white people are a minority, if you never describe your characters or give obvious clues to their origins, even people of color will read your characters as white. It’s best not to leave room for any doubt because racist people and even well-meaning clueless people will imagine that they have plausible deniability.
There’s an assumed default due to the skewed nature of mass-consumed fiction, in which everyone unless mentioned otherwise is thought to be white, straight, male (which is REALLY weird because it’s not like women are actually in the minority), and come from either a Christian or Christian-based areligious background.
Try this little thought experiment:
The chef cleaned the last of the knives and put it away in the block.
Who did you picture? A white man? A woman? What color was their skin? Were they fat or thin?
I bet you didn’t picture a heavy-ish brown Middle-Eastern-coded woman. But a chef just like that is a major character in my series.
Let’s try another one.
The commander scowled at his team before handing out a fresh set of weapons.
I was thinking of a Black man with an ocular disability. What, you didn’t get that from my sentence? You couldn’t tell I was totally fangirling over Nick Fury again? (He’s dreamy. This is a factual statement.)
He was tall, and broad, and very fat, and he seemed nonthreatening and kind. Shulamit studied his appearance, trying to parse his ethnicity. His skin was the same medium brown as her own and that of her people, but his hair was thick and coarse and pulled into the rough locks that looked like braids but weren’t, like the people to the south whose skin was darker.
Would you have gotten any of that if I hadn’t described him? You would have assumed that both of them were white and that Tzuriel was thin, most likely. It matters to me that they look the way they’re supposed to look, so I had no qualms about describing them plainly.
Here are some of the ways Fiona Zedde describes some of the characters in her Black lesbian short story anthology When She Says Yes:
skin like the bark of a baobab tree
the ascetic lines of her face hewn in rich tones of rosewood
My short Afro wouldn’t wilt in the rain.
I knew what I must have looked like to her – a petite, brown-skinned girl with wide, long-lashed eyes and rounded cheeks who’d never seen the inside of a tattoo parlor, much less wanted a tattoo.
>> Mentioning traces that will lead the reader to just know they are?
You have to be careful with that. A lot of my readers, including women with dark skin and my own mother, thought that the Perachis were supposed to be Black, not brown. One of my best friends got all the way through my book four draft and thought my Portuguese-coded characters were supposed to be in Spain. And there are people who read Hunger Games and didn’t know Rue was Black, although I feel weird mentioning that because I haven’t read or seen them myself.
In short (too late!) there’s no reason not to mention it and a lot of reasons mentioning it is actually vital if you want the representation to be meaningful.
As a Chinese-American person who writes Chinese/Chinese-American characters, even if their heritage has little bearing on the plot, I make a point of describing them as Chinese, whether it’s through cultural markers (surnames, or speaking Chinese dialects) or appearance.
We live in a world where readers will default to white unless it’s specifically spelled out for them: otherwise they will bend over backwards trying to justify why this character is white and not PoC.Here’s an example: a book I read in middle school featured a Japanese-American teacher whose only marker was her surname, and yet when we had to do collages depicting her, everyone used a photo of a white woman instead.
I strongly recommend against using traces to describe your PoC characters: we suffer from enough invisibility as is, and your method implies that describing our races would be shameful.
I haven’t posted here in a while, but small update related to this blog: I passed my N1 JLPT last December so yeah, I’ll take that out of my about. For now, I’m still taking a break from studying because I have actual, real life work to take care of, but my work load should lessen in the coming weeks so I should try to squeeze some studying in there.
My planned study plan will involve tons of Japanese vocab, some grammar revisions and, if I can make the time, some Korean because I really wanna start learning it again (I’ll post pics of my Korean books if I do, because the illustrations are cute)
MY BOOKS ARRIVED YAY! Over the course of 9 months I have acquired all 4 of the current TTMIK grammar books and I love them so much. I also got two cute little magnetic book marks that I’m very happy with!
These books are easy for me to read and learn from! These all go into my notes and then I come up with some (not all) of my lesson from these! These books have been very beneficial to my Korean learning - I got book number one during Christmas 2015, book two this spring, and for my birthday just gone I got three and four.
Delivery was a day under two weeks which is quite good for books travelling from Seoul to Ireland and as per usual they came in perfect condition. I really reccommend these to everyone! Even though it took me a few months to even start understanding and looking at these books but my knowledge has grown so much from these in less than a year!
I hope everyone looks forward to my future lessons as I continue to learn from these wonderful books!
You can find these books and more at the TTMIK book store: mykoreanstore.com
My collection of Korean books. There’s Japanese and Chinese language textbooks in there too^^ I can’t wait to move and buy a wider study table and bigger bookshelf. I think I will be getting more Japanese and Chinese books this year. I’m excited to learn more.
Since I didn’t study yesterday… I studied for almost 5 hours today (´･_･`) So this morning I had my first Italki lesson for Japanese, I have to say it is my worst Italki experience everrrrrr. 90% of the time she was speaking in Japanese and 99% of the time I don’t understand her at all （−＿−；） ’ what do you mean? In English? I don’t understand!! Sigh I need to study more to hold a basic conversation before I start using Italki for Jap… Seriously I felt like I was stupid
So I proceed on my own. Saw some progress and I start to feel better of myself now lol ( ^ω^ ) what I’ve learnt: あいさつ / 国家なまえ / continue to form sentences with は の
Korean Korean Korean my favourite~ the integrated Korean book seems good! There’s a Korean saying 불행중 다행이다 (It could be worse) literal meaning: a piece of good luck among many pieces of bad luck
It’s really hard to romanize hangul to where it gets the point across correctly. The way Eunwoo’s name is romanized doesn’t actually match the pronunciation, so you just have to listen closely. In Eunwoo (은우), the vowel 으 makes a sound kind of like the ‘u’ in ‘push’. And the 우 doesn’t really make a Woo sound, but more of a sound like the ‘u’ in ‘rude’. This factor also goes for the pronunciation of names for idols like Wonwoo (원우) from Seventeen and Minwoo (민우) from Boyfriend. Hope that helped! - Admin M