i’ve made so many heavy edits to sunlight girl over the last few months, like rewritten entire sections, fixed dialogue, pruned awkward exposition, all the way down to little tweaks, like word order or unnecessary articles. combined with all my nitpicking for the last 3 years and it probably has only the most basic likeness to the original. iDK there’s something deeply satisfying about editing, like sculpting the story. smoothing out its crude form. you learn while you’re doing it too.