Hey! I recently went through and edited this entire thing! People who have read it before will find that it’s much the same, with a few passages added/reworded for clarity, grammar, and flow. I hope that you’ll find it a little improved and that perhaps some of the characters intentions/inner thoughts will be a bit clearer. I admit that I didn’t do a ton of planning when I first leapt into writing this, so some of my ideas for Hannibal and Will got swept aside.
As always, thanks for reading, and thank you especially for all of your positive feedback! Chapter 9 will be up soon; I’m editing it as we speak! We’re passing one of the big hurdles to the story with this one, and I’m really excited to get into the good stuff B)