i figured it's okay for the last chapter

Okay so with the story that I’m working on right now at one point a character wakes up to find that she’s switched places with an alternate dimension counterpart of hers. And this other her whose body she switched into led a different lifestyle, which means the charater is in a body thats much more athletic that she’s used to. And at this point she hasn’t totally figured out whats really happened, and the point is I’m really proud of the way she’s described her figure changing from ‘fuck the gym’ to ‘life long athlete’

“She was athletic. She was ripped. She had a fucking six pack.

On the downside, it seemed that with the lack of body fat, her former impressive curves were gone. She certainly wasn’t a pencil, but her hips appeared to have re-gained the ability to lie.”