good idea poor execution

sangrientojoe  asked:

I really liked Val Velocity, not as a person but how different he is from a killjoy that we usually imagine and I think he was doing what he thought he should do in a situation he thought was spiraling out of control and he's a really good example of what lack of help mentally/physically and what desperation can do to a person and how everyone has different ideas of right and wrong, especially when it comes to how he and the girl perceived things and how things finaly caught up to him in the end

Yeah, I definitely think he’s a good IDEA for a character–the execution was just really poor. I think it would have been way better if they made us wonder if Val was actually right. Like what if they showed Dr. D acting suspiciously, and you started to wonder if maybe Val was right about him? But instead, Val pretty much just flailed around, mouthed off to everyone, and killed people for no particular reason. It sucks because there was a kernel of a good idea in there, but it just didn’t come to fruition.

decadeoldtiger  asked:

GHM please!

G: Do you write your story from start to finish, or do you write the scenes out of order?

I skip around as I come up with stuff and then connect them later.

H: How would you describe your style?

Good ideas with poor execution. Decent dialogue but lacking in substance.

M: Got any premises on the back burner that you’d care to share?


Like… One day I’ll go back to Adachi and write some with him and FemProtag feeling the consequences of the Accomplice Ending.

I’ve also got an Ultimax one that was the first story I ever started but it embarrasses me waaaay too much.

Then there’s so much for Guzma and Moon, including one where they tail Nanu who seems to be going out on a date with Moon’s mom.

Thank you so much! I really like getting replies to asks about my fics.