go to bed haiju


Haven’t done a post like this in a while… in case you were wondering what an on-paper edit looks like when I’m doing a pass on a chapter? A mess, that’s what. XD

Usually the polish edit isn’t this intense, but since a lot of Dr. Wagner’s little arc here was written late in the game, it underwent a lot of changes post-beta-read. And as usual I didn’t necessarily keep all the edits I made when I typed everything up, since I’m forever making minor tweaks and changes… which backfires when I end up with typos in the final draft. Ah well.