some people suggested I draw pricefield and make them look more visually interesting, so in prep for that here are some edits. 

I gave Max a ruddier, frecklier face with some acne and bushiness to her eyebrows (with the added bonus of making her look a bit like Jimmy Hopkins, another vg character based off of Holden Caulfield.) and gave Chloe some minor tweaks and scars to make her really look like she’s really been through the shit she’s been through and has the lifestyle she does. I probably wont ever draw her with hererochromia even though i love it though, just cause im sure ppl would bug me about it haha

EDIT: also yes, this is ok to reblog and you’re free to draw them this way if you’d like obvs lol, id love that <3