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Get Out.

Originally posted by tess453

Peter Parker x Reader

Request: Yes

Summary: Deciding to stay in for a date, Peter and the Reader are faced with annoying and embarrassing comments from the whole team, who are unaware of their relationship.

Word Count: 2,428

Warnings: language, fluff, annoying avengers (??), embarrassed!Peter, embarrassed!Reader, cuteness, LOTR trilogy. (Let me know if I missed any)

A/N: Alright homies, I apologize it has taken me so long to upload something. I’ve been reaally stressed. So hopefully this is okay? For the anon that requested this, I hope you like it. I’d love some feedback, as always. Enjoy reading!


Dark, gray clouds blocked any source of light from shining through the big, thick glass windows surrounding every inch of the building.

The entire tower was filled with a solemn mood that spread into every corner and room.

Most of the team dreaded days like these, since it put a damper on their mood, (especially Steve).

You, however, cherished days like these the most.

It’s where you find your peace and inner self, no matter how depressing that may sound.

It helps you relax and release any stresses that corrupt your thoughts.

But the best reason of all is that you don’t have to leave the house, even if you had a date with Peter tonight.

However, thinking that idea through, you realized something.

The whole team would be here.

With Peter and you.

During your date.

Well, fuck.

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A Hard Day’s Night

Pairing: Dean/Castiel

Prompt: Castiel, bothered by his friends because he never even kissed someone, decides he can’t handle the nagging anymore and does something he thought he’d never do.

Tags: student!cas, escort!dean, angst 

Words: 1116

A/N: Part one of a series if there’s interest, feedback is very much appreciated.  

Tagging: @amazingstuartwhoisnotonfire @thedisgraced @funnycas @destielonfire @purgatoan @sunkissedsam @prettyboydean @saminzat @ducksorclowns @castielismyfavouriteangel (please let me know if you want to be tagged, or if I should get you off the list!)

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hey merlin fandom - something serious for once

lately a lot of my fic author friends have come to me telling they feel like they dont get a lot of comments/kudos anymore. it’s true, our fandom is getting older and as such smaller, but i still feel like a lot of people love merlin and love to read fics for it. i think that is very sad that talented writers go underappreciated, i hate to think all the lovely authors will leave or stop writing because they feel no one reads or appreciate their fics anymore!

comments/kudos and feedback in general are so so important for writers, so my idea would be, what if we made a merlin fic author appreciation day ? i know a writer appreciation day already exists, but i think we could definitely also have one for our fandom specifically. or maybe even an entire week? 

idk, just a dedicated time frame to spread the love and tell some authors who you feel dont get enough love recently how much you adore their work :) 

any thoughts?

You Left Me (Stan Uris x Reader)

Originally posted by stanoodle

Request: can I️ request a stan x reader where stan broke up with the reader months ago because of whatever reason you want leaving the reader broken-hearted and now the reader is better but stan suddenly wants her back and can u please use the “you left me…” starter??

Authors note: I hope you enjoy this!!! Feedback is very much appreciated!!!


You were finally happy, finally over Stan Uris. He was your whole life at one point, your first love. He had given you so many happy memories, so many fond moments that you’ll cherish your whole life. He also broke your heart, stomped on it over and over. You thought you would never be able to get over him, never be able to move past that sarcastic asshat. But you did, your heart seemed to heal itself over the many months the two of you weren’t together.

Stan on the other hand was a mess. He couldn’t think straight, he thought it would be better to push you away then to talk to you about his feelings. He was scared, scared that you might laugh at him or push him aside. He loved you. He wanted you to be happy all the time, he wanted you to never feel hurt or scared, he wanted the best for you. Stan had given you his heart and to him, you still had it.

Which lead up to this moment now.

Stanley was standing outside your front door, sad eyes and a slight pout on his lips. He held your favorite flowers in one hand and the other was playing with the hem of his sweater. The air was cold on this dark night, snow falling silently behind him. It was a beautiful sight.

“I am so sorry Y/N…” His voice was low and sorrowful, his eyes darting around, not staying in one place. He was nervous, worried you wouldn’t forgive, worried he sincerely fucked up this time.

“You left me…” Your voice was rough, cracking slightly as tears filled your eyes. You were mad at him, mad at the fact that he had the audacity to show up after months of nothing, no phone calls or soft smiles, no deep conversations or even short ones.

You wanted to hit him, slap him across the face, show him how much he hurt you. But you also wanted to hug him, hold him tight and tell him how much you missed him. You shifted your weight, contemplating on what to say or do next.

“You left Stan, you broke my heart-”

“I know I did, I’m so fucking sorry. I-I’m an idiot and selfish and I do not deserve you. But god dammit do I love you.” Stan looked you in the eyes, watching your reaction. He had never told you he loved you, he never knew how to.

You gasped at his words, eyes widening slightly as a blush blossomed on your cheeks. You could feel your heart pounding away in your chest, matching Stan’s. Both of you were blushing messes, tears filled your eyes and a few fell. Stan took a tentative step closer to you, his free hand going to hold your cheek, wiping away your fallen tears.

“I don’t expect you to forgive me Y/N/N, but I would do anything for a second shot.” He mumbled to you, voice barely above a whisper.

You thought for a moment, mulling over the idea. You truly did miss Stan, your life without him was lonely and boring. He brought light and life to you, warmth and happiness, love and compassion. You loved him.

You leaned your face further into his palm, a soft smile tugging on your lips as you watched his confused expression. You turned your head farther into his grasp, kissing the palm of his hand softly.

“One more chance Uris, one more.” You cocked an eyebrow at him, watching his lips twitch up into a smile. He nodded his head at you, placing a kiss to your forehead.

“I love you Y/N L/N.” He whispered softly, letting out a gently sigh.

“And I love you Stanley Uris.”


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Imperfect (Angst) (Potential New Admin)

Originally posted by kingsobi

[ reminder: these are submitted to us so that we can see if we want the writers to be admins on our account. we’re sharing them with you so that you can give feedback! if you like this, help the writer out and send us a message about it or reblog/reply with a comment. full credit goes to the blog listed at the very bottom ] [ other applications and scenarios here ]

Word Count: 1,173

Trigger Warning: mentions of death and suicide

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~200 Follower Celebration~

IT’S HAPPENED! I OFFICIALLY REACHED 200 FOLLOWERS!!

To each and every one of you guys, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart! I never thought I would get here. Thank you to everyone who has ever liked, comment or reblogged my writing. I love to write and I love to share it. I love getting feedback from y’all and I love it when you say you enjoyed it. I read every single comment that comes through and it makes my day 100% of the time.

I love and cherish each and every one of you guys and YOU ROCK!

To Celebrate, I figured I would give y’all a few options!

Rules:

1. Please be following me!

2. Send in your request VIA ASK!

3. You can send in as many as you want but SEND IN SEPARATE ASKS. (Please use the appropriate emoji ex. ✏️  🎼 💜 ❓)

4. This celebration will end One Week from Today: October 16, 2018.

*Requests will be closed during this week for this celebration, but will open back up on October 17th.*

Things To Do:

1. ✏️Drabble Challenge: Below the cut are 84 prompts. Send me up to three numbers with your Marvel character pairing and get a drabble in return!✏️ (Read Completed)

2. 🎼Musical Names: Send your name/username and get a song playlist for every letter.🎼

3. 💜Character Ships: Send in a brief description of yourself and I will pair you with a Marvel character! 💜

4. ❓Get to Know: Ask me any question! Or tell me something about yourself! I’d love to get to know you!❓

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archiveofourown.org
Show Chapter | Archive of Our Own
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
By Organization for Transformative Works

Still he calls to her. Still he haunts her.

When she’d left him to wake alone in that dingy hotel room on some unknown planet after they’d agreed to meet–when their connection had become too much to bear. When they’d laid down their weapons and fallen together, in their loneliness and craving and need.

When she’d disappeared into the morning light, carrying his scent on her skin and her shame and penitence in her heart.

And a new life in her belly, barely beginning.

He still calls out to her.

For her.

Here is the first chapter of my new story, Maybe If The Stars Align

It takes place several years after the conclusion of THE LAST JEDI and includes time-skips, Baker!Rey and a Reylo Baby.

HUGE thanks and much love to @perrydowning for looking the first chapter over and telling me here thoughts. Your feedback and encouragement are always cherished.

Enjoy!


- Jackie

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I feel that it’s important to address, at this point, the idea that you may not like your critique just because you don’t like it. That’s okay! We all have different opinions, and the person who knows your character best is you. You certainly do not have to take our advice on anything if it conflicts with how you feel the character should be written. Our goal is just to give you some things to think about when it comes to improving your character, not to dictate precisely how that improvement should come about.

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If you saw us say something offensive, if you think we’ve misunderstood something, if you think we missed a really glaring plot hole, if you have a question about something we said whether it applies to whatever you’re currently writing or not, or if you’ve got some insight into a subject we may not know much about, message us! If you want to get the message out specifically to the submitter or asker, the best way is to reblog the post and comment on it that way. I guarantee you we’ll be grateful for the help.

Please, in all cases, send us feedback. We love feedback. We live for feedback. Even if it’s just a general comment like “Hey, I saw your critique of my character and I thought it was really helpful, thanks!” we absolutely cherish it. We are not gods, sitting on high and handing down verdicts of “good OC” and “bad OC”. We are your peers, attempting to start a dialogue with you. Don’t be afraid to talk to us!

(Edited 10/20/2015 by Kyo to add commentary re: reblogs)

Obi-Wan x Reader (young padawan Obi-Wan!)

Summary: padawan! Obi-Wan has been on a mission for over three months. (Y/N) is worried sick, and distressed because they think that Obi-Wan is dead. One day after almost giving up, an unexpected guest visits the reader

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You were pacing beside the window, staring down at the city. Your lover, Obi-Wan, was still gone. He was on a mission with his master. At least that was what you were told. He’d been gone for three months… Part of you believed that he was dead, yet another part of you had to believe that he was alive. You could not live without him.

“I hope he’s alright….” You mutter to yourself as you cross your arms, trying to keep yourself warm.
“Ms. (Y/N), your master will be with you shortly.” A robot had spoken, startling you. You jumped in surprise and looked at it before processing the words it had said.
“O-oh… Thank you….” You muttered before the door shut again. Sighing, you sit down, waiting for your master to enter.
The door, however, did not open. You stared at it for a while, wondering if your master would even appear. Shrugging, you cross your legs and begin to meditate. Hours had passed, when at last you felt a presence outside the room.
Three knocks.
“Come in” You said before the door opened. The cushion on the sofa beside you sunk down, and you sighed.
“The robot told me you’d be here 3 hours ago, master. Why so late?”
No reply.
You sighed.
“Have I done something wrong?” You inquired, eyes still closed, in meditating position.
At last you opened your eyes and turned to the person you expected to be your master.
“May I ask why you aren’t speaking to-”
You then realized that it wasn’t your master. It was Obi-Wan…
Eyes widen, you stop mid-sentence. Tears begin to well in your eyes, for it had been months since you last saw your beloved Obi-Wan.
Instantly, you ingulf him in a warm embrace, tears beginning to streak your face.
“O-Obi Wan…” You breathed, looking at his face. He smiled, gently kissing your forehead.
“I’m back, my love..” He whispers gently before placing a kiss on your forehead before holding you close.
“I-I was so worried… A-about you” You cried softly, tears of relief and happiness still streaming down your face. “I.. I thought you had died…” He’d never been gone THAT long on a mission.
“It’s alright, my love. I’m here… I’m here…” He whispered.
“Are you alright…” You questioned, sitting up to look at his gorgeous eyes. You ran your fingers through his hair, a small smile playing at your lips.
“Yes, I’m quite alright.” He assured you. Once again, and rested your head against his chest and closed your eyes, cherishing every moment.