Do you have any tips on developing characters? As in how do I decide what they look like. I know it's my choice since it's my story, but I'm having a hard time putting down what I imagine on to paper. Should I find a photography of something close and work from there? Or should I just be attempting to describe them the best that I can?
Finding pictures of your characters is a great idea! Whether you choose famous actors, lesser known models, or just random people on the internet, I don’t recommend showing these pictures around to your friends or editors though. Those pictures should just be for you, to help you create a clear picture of the character that you’re better able to describe.
You also might take a picture and make some changes to it. As in, you like the facial structure of a person, but you imagine them a bit fuller, or maybe their hair is a different color or length. You can choose an image as a base and play with it to get a good character appearance in your mind.
Readers will develop their own opinions of what your characters look like, so apart from some of the major traits, like skin, eye, and hair color, probably their height and general body type, the rest can likely be left to the imagination of the reader.
So like you’d be sending Luke pictures all day of you without a shirt, without pants, without your bra, and then the last pic you’d send him a pic of the strap on dildo you’d bought, when he gets home he just pushes you against the wall and presses his hard on against you “I’ve had to try and keep this hidden all day that last picture do you have any idea what that did to me” he growls “I think I have an idea” you purr into his ear hands roaming over his body “how bout we take this to the bedroom” he says panting slightly “absolutely” you say biting his neck before pushing him away and sauntering toward the bedroom “strip” you demand when he walks in behind you “please baby” he whimpers when you still don’t do anything “please what Lukey I’m just enjoying the view” “touch me please” “hmmm I guess I can touch you a little” you relent moving towards him wrapping your arms around his neck kissing him roughly he moans into your mouth pulling you closer his hands gripping your hips so tightly you know you’ll have bruises tomorrow. You nudge him towards the bed rolling your hips against his making him fall back into the bed with a groan you smirk walking over to your box of toys pulling up a cock ring “babe please no please oh my god not that too” Luke whines moving back on the bed “oh yes baby sorry but you’re so close you’d probably cum while I’m opening you up” you mumble into his hip as you slide the ring on “fuck” he swears “god I love it when you swear from what I do to you” you groan licking and biting up his chest “you’re gonna have so many hickeys babe hope you don’t have any shirtless photo shoots” “none” he mumbles arching slightly “mmm good now wait here I’ll be back” you say getting up and walking back to your box of toys and pulling out some lube and your strap on walking back over to the bed you you slide your bra and underwear off slowly hands trailing over the sensitive spots on your skin moaning slightly before attaching the straps and moving back on the bed “you wanna ride me tonight yeah I think you should it’ll be so much fun” “oh god babe just do something it hurts” Luke whimpers bringing his hands up and pulling you closer running his hands over your body “spread your legs then, you wanna feel my fingers inside you yeah is that good” you say spreading some lube on your finger sliding it in slowly “fucking hell” Luke swears grabbing at your tits roughly “fuck Luke” you whimper pumping your finger slowly in and out of him then leaning down and sliding your mouth over his dick sucking lightly making Luke try and push you off “it hurts” he whines “do I need to stop” you pant “no no more god more” “as you wish” you say sliding a second finger in “fuck fuck y/n shit” you chuckle a little sliding your mouth back over his cock bobbing your head sucking slightly humming around him loving the pained whimpers and moans “you ready for one more” you say sliding your mouth off his dick with one last flick of your tongue to his tip “fuck I just need you in me” Luke pants “oh god hearing you say that, so sexy baby” you groan motioning for him to sit up “com on baby I need you just as much now fuck” you whimper laying down spreading lube of the dildo “you look so hot like this Luke god” you moan as he slides down slowly “so full fuck oh god shit” Luke almost yells stilling to get used to the feeling “Luke please move shit” you whimper at the pressure on your clit he starts lifting himself off and then sliding back down slowly you sit up slightly reaching your hand to Luke’s ass fingers sliming his hole making him cry out “dammit you’re clenched really tight” you moan dropping back on the bed “baby please loosen the ring I need to cum” he moans riding you faster “soon Lukey I’m getting close just a little longer” Luke just whimpers again hands moving to play with your tits “beg for it” you moan thrusting your hips up to meet Luke “please baby god y/n I’m so full I need to cum please” he whines his voice high “good boy” you moan reaching down and loosening the cock ring “yes oh my god fuck” Luke moans “say my name Luke” you moan so close to your own orgasm “Y/N SHIT” Luke yells cumming all over your chest “baby yes oh fuck” you moan your own orgasm rushing through “that was amazing” Luke pants flopping next to you groaning at the soreness “yeah it was” you say taking the straps off throwing it on the floor and curling up next to Luke kissing his neck softly before both of you fall asleep.