Fairy Tail 472 Reaction

*screams* I’m so happy wahl still has this cool personality+power !! unlike Brandish and Dimaria…. please don’t Mashima !! keep one JUST ONE of those 12 AS A RESPECTFUL CHARACTER.

Originally posted by londonlark

*Judging* 

that was the MOST UNFUNNY joke in FT, and that’s saying a lot since I’m talking about the same man who thinks boob grab joke are hilarioooous, actually, so hilarious that he repeated it every chance he gets.

I love how Juvia is added there even though it’s unnecessary, it’s like Mashima wants to remind us that they are a “thing”… *facepalm" 

oh ok, i get it, you are hinting that if Laxus didn’t win, it’s because he is sick because FT guild is full of OP people who don’t lose. probably will have another Laxus VS fight with him bieng ok and wining easily, it’s probably against wahl too.

“LIKE NOTHING WE FACED BEFORE”

I hate this character so damn much, is it her hobby to dress as slutty as possible? i know the other girls do it too but she seems too extreme about it

2 of you? they suck !! you can win easily individually.

Originally posted by thedarkesthour13

when will this arc have an actual struggle? other than acnalogia who is probably the final boss of the series so I don’t count him.

Ohhhh what do i see ;)


The more Dimiria speaks the more 1 dimensional she seems,

Oh boy, so he WILL lose cause he sick ! it would have been a lot more intreasting if Gray was watching Lexus incase he needs help, cause he is the only one who knows about him being sick, but I guess I have “expectations”


this chapter gets Shitty writing with a chance of Criticism /10


-Mod Turtle

Original posting here:

hello ! ive been working on this foxy friend for a while now (theyre gonna be a premade, and strawberry themed ;v;) and i was wondering if you guys or your followers could do a bit of critiquing for me? thank you !

(PS i adore your blog, you guys are really sweet)


Critique begins here:

Hello there, thank you for the submission!  Looks like you are off to a great start!  You have a great shape developed in terms of the face, cute smile and cheeks and the foam work looks well smoothed.  That will make furring and shaving much easier and save you a huge headache!  One thing i noticed was the one eye looks like it is missing the white light spots on it!  Ifigured that was a minor error but want you to know in case you didnt see it!  Be sure the spots go on the same side as the eye that has it to avoid the suit from having a cross eyed look!  BTW, your eye coloring and shading skills are great!  The eyes are very mesmerizing and easy  to look at!  They will make the suit really pop when it is finished.  The nose looks like it is a bit lopsided.  I am not sure if that is just an illusion from the camera angle or not.  You may also want to stretch the fleece that is over it as it looks like it is bumping up a bit.  Another thing that you may consider tweaking a bit is your ears.  Im not sure if they are attached yet or just pinned in place but I would consider positioning them a little more upright as they dont look so natural in the position you currently have them in.  Take a look at these photos of some red foxes and their ears, this might help you position them a bit better! (x) (x) (x)


Over all awesome job, this is really going to turn out well!  I cant wiat to see if finished, do keep us updated on your progress!  Wed love to see it!  Keep rocking! <3


Hope that helps you!  Followers feel free to add you own advice too on anything I may have missed!

I would’ve handled that scene a liiiitle differently

Alrighty, time for a little constructive feedback on my life’s obsession!

As much as I loved the Manimal episode, there’s one thing I wish had played out in a slightly different manner. So we have this scene, right?

Everyone lost it at Chat’s reaction. I did too. But I think they could’ve gotten away with more. Imagine:

Everything is going pretty much the same way as it did up until this point.

Then we get to his facial expression. I would’ve freaked him out a little more, open his mouth and eyes really big like REALLY big, and instead of him flourishing his baton and posing, I’d have him snap right into anger mode.

Ok, fine, it’s not easy. Even I admit that I didn’t push that one enough.

Then, and here’s where I really deviate. I would’ve SAVED a certain move until this very moment

Bypass the attack flourish scene entirely (like they did in the Copycat episode) because this is srs bizns and in the same shot, lunge into epic forced perspective

THEN we can go into the reveal

With one exception. He still has Cataclysm activated, so he needs to get rid of it right? And he needs to use it before she hits the global reset button. So

It is important that he doesn’t let her see that he wigged out a rage!

Then the rest of the episode would play out virtually the same way. I might’ve animated the hug a little differently, but I thought it was fine as it played out.

I’ll let y’all extrapolate on what any of that might’ve meant, should you chose to indulge XD

So that is my two scents!

Advice on how to Critique

Let’s talk about how you can critique respectfully without sounding like an asshole. 

Be Objective: ugly/gross/disgusting are great examples of what not to say during a critique where you aim to help someone. You can talk about what elements of the piece is a success and/or failure—of course this depends on your opinion so you can’t be 100% objective, but deliver it in a way that consists of facts supporting your argument instead of using words like “ugly, disgusting, unattractive” 

Bad example: the coloring is horrible and it doesn’t fit the mood well at all  

Good example (notice how there are no subjective words): the colors are not working with the mood you’re aiming for, to improve it you could [insert helpful comment here]

Another Good example: this piece could benefit from [insert helpful comment here]

A really Bad example: this is really bad, your shading is way off 

Be Polite: Common etiquette here. Most of the time these artists aren’t looking for critique, they just want to show the world what they made and promote themselves. You critique to help them improve if they want it. And if they do, they will ask you. Simple as that. A random stranger suddenly critiquing the shit out of your art is very awkward, especially when you didn’t ask for it. Trust me, if they wanted it in the first place they would’ve asked for it. If you really have a dying urge to approach them about something they could’ve improved on, private message is a thing. Approach cautiously, be respectful, be helpful. Congrats to you for caring so much and doing it in a way that encourages them to improve!

BONUS—The Sandwich Method: Say something that works, then proceed to tell them what they could improve on, then end with something else that works.

Finally. Remember. Help not Hurt. You want them to improve, don’t dampen their spirits with rude commentary. And hey, if you’re doing a critique and you’re like god those hands are so fucking beautiful I just want to let them know how talented they are don’t hold back. Give credit where credit is due! You can help them AND compliment them. But do NOT insert your negative opinions there. 

TLDR; 

If you claim you’re trying to help an artist but you’re being an asshole in your delivery then that’s not critique. That’s just you being an asshole. That’s not respectful. And most people won’t take you seriously. 

Here is a video (strong language due to the serious topic) that would be helpful if reading is not your thing. 

A critique does not consist in saying that things aren’t good the way they are. It consists in seeing on just what type of assumptions, of familiar notions, of established and unexamined ways of thinking the accepted practices are based… To do critcism is to make harder those acts which are now too easy.     — Michel Foucault

(via sonofforneus)

(A table of contents is available. It will be kept updated throughout the series. This series will remain open for additional posts.)

Part Three: Taking It In & Spitting It Out

Asking for critique can be terrifying: Are they going to like it? Is it really up to scrutiny? Is there even anyone out there who will want to read it? You’re putting your creation, your offspring of imagination, into the hands of–sometimes–a stranger or–more often–a friend or colleague. These other people may be creative themselves or not; either way this outside perspective on something you’ve grown from your own imagination is nerve-wracking and sometimes heartbreaking. Assuming your critique partner has done their job, you’ll be feeling ~emotions,~ all of them. If they’ve given you constructive criticism, they’ll have given you the good and the bad, and they’ll have flung you off on a roller coaster of fury and elation. So how are we supposed to handle that?

With grace. Outwardly, your first step is to say thank you. Always say thank you. This person gave up their time and energy to read your work with a critical eye. That’s much more investment than a casual reading requires. Even if you don’t like anything they said once you’ve looked over the critique, thank them anyway. Thank them for their support. Thank them for their time. Thank them for their thoughts and feedback, and promise to give them all due thought. Even if you decide not to use any of it, it is your obligation to at least consider their comments. Let’s talk about that a little bit.

Now that you’ve received the critique, it’s time to sit down and read it. Remember a couple of things when evaluating a critique:

Remember who the source is. Did you choose someone who is an acquaintance rather than a friend, hoping for a more neutral party, and now it turns out they have very little good to say about it? Remember that personal preference exists! Try to determine if the things they’re unhappy about are tied to a specific trope. If so (and it’s a trope you were actually going for), consider whether the person maybe just doesn’t like that trope. I once gave a fantasy story to a person for critique who doesn’t like fantasy much, so surprise, surprise, their comments tended toward negative on aspects of fantasy. Shocking. I have also given stories for critique to people who didn’t particularly enjoy my company or writing style. They pointed out things I had done quite on purpose as things they hated about the piece. Well, that’s okay. If they pointed out something I’d done on purpose, at least that means they noticed it, even if they didn’t like it. Comments from your family are less likely to be meaningful evaluations of the writing (unless they are also practiced writers with their own knowledge and can set you–your family status–aside like my Libbs can. Way to be, Libbs). Friends can also be this way: more concerned with keeping an intact friendship and supporting your creative endeavors than giving you helpful feedback that goes beyond simply, “This was great!”

Remember who is in control. You are. It’s your story. In the end, you can reject every single comment in a critique. You don’t have to change a thing. If you’re happy with it, then don’t mess with it. But on the other hand, why did you send it out if you weren’t looking to change anything? It’s sometimes smartest to let a critique sit after you’ve looked at it once. If there’s anything in there that calls any of your story or technique into question–and there will be–high emotions will fly. Let it be. Come back to it when you can safely evaluate the critique and your work separately. You need to cultivate a sort of detached view of your work when looking at critiques.

Consider why a comment was made. Maybe the actual comment itself is unhelpful or you don’t agree with it, but you should at least think about why it was said. Is that background thought that resulted in this comment valid? Is a character’s comment out of character when put in the context of this reader’s thought process while reading? If so, is there a way to change what’s around it to make it clearer that the comment is in character? Looking behind the surface value of what’s said treats the root cause of a problem you may not have known about or even considered.

Once you’ve considered the comments, it’s now up to you whether you implement them or not. Make sure you’re treating the source not the result. It may take more rewriting than originally anticipated to tackle the flaw brought to light in a character at the end of the piece. You may need to rework your climax or resolution. You may need to reconsider your style or even the POV you chose. Be open and receptive to what your critique partners have to say, but also remember that if you don’t think a change is in the best interest of the story you wanted to tell, you are not obligated to make the changes. Read them, consider them thoughtfully and seriously, yes; make them, absolutely not.

Next up: Some software tips!

La Muse Tragique&Sexy - Maladies Mentales et Regard Masculin

Nouvelle traduction d’un article que j’ai trouvé intéressant ! Il a été publié en novembre 2015 sur guerrillafeminism et est écrit par Anne Thériault. Les liens qui sont dans l’article sont en anglais.

J’ai un souvenir très clair de la première fois que j’ai repéré la Muse Tragique&Sexy. J’avais une vingtaine d’années et je vivais dans une vieille maison en bois délabrée tout au nord d’Halifax. Je discutais avec une amie sur MSN Messenger, ce qui devrait vous donner une idée de l’année que c’était. On parlait de musique - dans le cadre de longues et infinies conversations sur Les Chansons Qui m’Accrochent Vraiment - et à un moment elle m’a envoyé le lien d’une vidéo Youtube de Ryan Adams, Sylvia Plath. C’était la première chanson de Ryan Adams que j’écoutais ; mon amie me l’avais envoyée parce qu’elle savait que j’adorais Plath et elle pensait que j’adorerais aussi cette chanson. Mais ça n’a pas été le cas.

Dieu sait que j’aurais aimé l’apprécier ; en tant que personne qui est à la fois une écrivaine et une femme vivant avec la maladie mentale, j’idolâtre probablement la Plath plus que je le devrais et je suis toujours à l’affut de la moindre information à son sujet. Le problème est que cette chanson ne parlait pas d’elle en réalité ; au bout du second couplet, il parut clair qu’Adam chantait sur quelqu’un d’autre, une personne dont la ressemblance avec Plath commençait et finissait avec le patronyme qu’elles partageaient.

La version qu’Adam avait de Plath était celle d’une sylphide buveuse de gin, fumeuse à la chaîne, adepte des baignades nues - « le genre », dit-il, « qui sort sans cesse puis dort une semaine ». Il fantasme sur son comportement à moitié imprudent, ce qui inclut mettre sa cendre de cigarette sur les tapis d’une demeure raffinée, dormir sur un bateau, et lui glisser des cachets. À un moment il espère qu’elle pourrait lui donner un bain (bath), ce qui pourrait être soit une référence à la scène dans La Cloche de Détresse où Esther Greenwood s’épanche sur les joies qu’elle éprouve à rester dans une baignoire fumante d’eau chaude, soit, ce qui est plus probable, c’est juste que c’est le seul mot qu’il a pu trouver qui rime avec Plath.

L’image qu’il peint est celle d’une femme qui n’a rien à voir avec la vraie Sylvia Plath, une non-fumeuse qui était méticuleuse au sujet du ménage et non, du moins de ce que je sais, renommée pour son habilité à baigner des hommes. Au lieu de ça, elle est une sorte de conglomérat de ses projections et de ses fantasmes - une femme qui marche sur le fil que les hommes semblent voir, ce fil qui sépare « être sexy » et « être malade mentale ». Une femme qui n’est pas vraiment une personne, plutôt une chose avec laquelle les hommes peuvent faire et exprimer ce qu’ils souhaitent.

Bien que Sylvia Plath ait été une poète et romancière farouchement brillante, elle est sans aucun doute plus connue pour son suicide. Culturellement, l’image qu’on associe le plus souvent avec elle est celle d’une jeune femme avec la tête dans le four. Sa dépression finale et sa mort ont fait de l’ombre sur sa vie et ses accomplissements, et son nom est devenu synonyme d’un type spécifique de beauté tragique. Quand Adam chante qu’il veut une Sylvia Plath, il ne veut pas dire qu’il veut la réalité d’une personne qui fait l’expérience d’un épisode dépressif ou d’idées suicidaires. Il indique qu’il veut une femme qui est assez triste mais d’une manière sauvage, impétueuse et sexy qui, d’une certaine manière, lui sera utile. Il ne veut pas une vraie personne ; il veut une Muse Tragique&Sexy.

La Muse Tragique&Sexy peut être trouvée dans la musique, dans les films, dans la littérature et dans à peu près toute autre forme de média. Elle n’est pas sans rappeler la Manic Pixie Dream Girl* - en fait, je dirais qu’il s’agit d’une sorte de croisement entre ces deux tropes - mais elle a quand même ses spécificités. Elle est généralement jeune, et presque toujours blanche. Elle est souvent représentée comme étant hyper-sexuelle - elle est le genre de femme à laquelle fait référence Jack Donaghy dans 30 Rock lorsqu’il dit « Les femmes émotionnellement instables sont fantastiques au lit ». Elle est abîmée, souvent à cause d’une agression sexuelle ou d’autres abus commis par des hommes. Sa vie porte en elle une espèce de Leçon Profonde, généralement une leçon que le personnage masculin a besoin d’apprendre.

La Muse Tragique&Sexy, c’est Joon dans Benny & Joon, une femme malade mentale qui, pour paraphraser une merveilleuse critique de Carleen Tibbets, se révèle ne pas avoir tant besoin d’une aide professionnelle que d’un petit ami. C’est Marla dans Fight Club, avec son étrange regard fixe et sa tendance à assister à des groupes de soutien pour des maladies qu’elle n’a pas. C’est Gia Carangi dans Gia, un film dont le slogan est « Trop Belle Pour Mourir, Trop Sauvage Pour Vivre ». C’est Babydoll dans Sucker Punch, une ingénue à couettes vêtue de lingerie qui fait des moues sexy pour parvenir à s’échapper d’une institution psychiatrique. C’est Suzanne dans Suzanne de Leonard Cohen, une femme qui est « à moitié folle » mais qui peut «  {toucher} votre corps parfait avec son esprit ».

La Muse Tragique&Sexy fétichise la souffrance des femmes en dépeignant les maladies mentales invalidantes filtrées par le regard rêveur de l’homme. Ce trope rend glamour l’addiction et des maladies comme la dépression, le désordre bipolaire, et la schizophrénie - des pathologies qui sont très nettement ingrates pour celleux d’entre nous qui vivent avec. La Muse Tragique&Sexy est vulnérable, et sa vulnérabilité est sexualisée. Son incapacité à prendre soin d’elle-même ou à prendre des décisions pour elle-même est présentée comme un élément de son charme.

Et peut-être que c’est la chose la plus frustrante avec la Muse Tragique&Sexy - le fait que ce type de personnage soit une chouette façon de supprimer l’autonomie d’une femme sans que le film, le livre ou la chanson soit vue comme ouvertement misogyne. Elle se tient à l’intersection entre le validisme et le sexisme, et ses maladies mentales sont dépeintes d’une façon qui rend louable, et même nécessaire, le fait que les autres prennent soin d’elle. On ressent de la gratitude envers les hommes qui se manifestent et la sauvent, parce qu’il est évident qu’elle ne peut pas le faire elle-même. On ressent de l’empathie pour les hommes qui rompent avec elle, parce qu’on voit qu’elle est difficile et volatile. On n’a jamais l’occasion de voir les choses de son point de vue ; souvent il est sous-entendu que ce serait impossible, parce que son point de vue est trop confus et fracturé.

Il est vraiment démoralisant de voir tant de récits qui traitent des femmes malades mentales littéralement comme des objets - des objets qui existent seulement pour satisfaire les besoins des hommes. Notre souffrance et notre détresse ne sont pas là pour être chosifiées, réemballées dans un flou artistique rêveur, puis servies comme une sorte de panacée destinée à les soulager. Nous méritons le droit à l’autonomie sur nos vies. Nous méritons d’exister comme des personnes complètes, des personnes qui peuvent être en proie à des luttes, certes, mais dont la valeur ne dépend pas de la façon dont ces luttes peuvent profiter aux autres. Nous méritons le droit d’exister en tant qu’êtres sexuels sans avoir nos maladies sexualisées par celleux qui n’en font pas l’expérience. Nous méritons le droit d’exister, un point c’est tout, sans avoir besoin de qualificatifs supplémentaires.

Il est important qu’il y ait une représentation médiatique des femmes malades mentales, mais toutes les représentations ne sont pas égales. Nous avons besoin de personnages qui reflètent les réalités diverses des gens qui vivent avec la maladie mentale ; nous avons besoin d’histoires qui montrent la portée complète de leurs vies - pas seulement les parties difficiles et douloureuses, mais aussi la joie et le triomphe de la survie malgré la tempête. Nous avons besoin d’histoires qui parlent de nous, et pas seulement de l’impact émotionnel que nous avons sur autrui.

Après tout, nous aussi nous sommes humaines.

*Pour une explication en français de ce qu’est la Manic Pixie Dream Girl, vous pouvez lire l’article de Madmoizelle à ce sujet.

I see so many people commenting on how this blog is going to hurt someone’s feelings and I couldn’t stand it anymore. Gather around kids and let me tell you a story…

Way back in 2003 when I was 14 I posted my Inuyasha fanart on an art site. I was so proud of this piece, it was the best thing I had ever done. The first and only comment it ever got was “wow this is awful, you suck, quit now” and you know what I did? I kept drawing, I got better. I was accepted to a private art college in 2007 where my art was ripped apart to my face and in front of my 20 other classmates by professionals four years. I graduated in 2011 with my degree in Illustration. 

What this place is doing isn’t even close to what a professional would tell you. They are still crits, and the artists in question can either sit in their pity party and cry or they can use it to fuel their passion and find ways to make their work better. Don’t just sit and cry about it. Fix it, make it better. 

From someone who has been there and done that.

You see, THIS is way over my head but I’m going to assume he’s right.

~Mod Baron

I never quite get over the changes made to the bargaining sequence prior to the Battle of the Five Armies for the film, largely because they made sure to make it clear that Thorin is being unreasonable due to the madness. He makes no real reasons for why he’s turning away destitute people from the one secure shelter right before winter. They are drastically outnumbered, and even with Thranduil’s army at his gates, it’s nothing but prideful suicide. Even when it was just men, he intended to bar them out, with full knowledge that Smaug is dead and their shelter is annihilated. It’s clearly just Thorin being unreasonable and unwilling to treat due to madness. 

Which is such a sharp contrast to the bargaining in the book, where Thorin makes clear and entirely reasonable arguments for why he won’t treat with the people of Laketown. His big thing is, “ We didn’t realize you killed Smaug until now, so this fortification is halfway here for him. Yet, suddenly there’s an army of elves at my doorstep, where I’m holed up with 12 other people and no provisions. Why should I sacrifice the one bit advantage that I have to treat with people who clearly mean to kill and rob us? Send the army of elves away and you’ll receive the help promised for your invaluable aide in killing the wyrm.” Those are very clear and very reasonable terms. It’s clearly the elves and men that are unwilling to bargain in this situation, despite clearly having the advantage. And then Tolkien spends the rest of the book saying it’s Thorin that is being unreasonable. Sorry Tolkien, but no matter how you look at it, the men and elves are being unreasonable and are acting like greedy thieves. Your favoritism is showing.

I understand why it was changed for the film, since it makes far more sense to have Thorin actually being unreasonable and truly show the dragon sickness. However, it erases what can easily be attributed as bad history/unreliable narrator. It’s the one time in Tolkien’s works where the elves are blatantly at fault, displaying the very attributes that they demonize dwarves for. (nevermind that most “negative” attributes of dwarves come from the influence of the 7 rings) I think that’s such a shame to lose that in the translation.

What to Take from a Writing Critique

Today I met with a professor to talk about my novel, which I’m writing as an independent study class with him as my supervisor. I’d only sent him an outline and 2 or 3 chapters, but he talked for almost two hours about all the things I should do if I want a successful novel. His advice included the following:

  • change the main character’s name
  • change the main character’s personality, because right now she’s just me (basically a self-insert)
  • make the main character more girly/bratty
  • add a romance between main character and best friend
  • change my ghost lore so it’s consistent with typical ghost lore
  • maybe scrap the ghost idea entirely and go the “Indian burial ground” route
  • maybe kill the best friend

As you can guess, the majority of the time I was listening, I was just thinking about how awful all this advice would be for my novel. But that’s just it—I know my novel way better than he knows it, after only 3 chapters and a barebones outline. I know it’s not best for my characters or their development to throw in another romance or make my ghosts more like demons or ectoplasm rather than the way they are now.

But I wrote all his advice down anyway. Even though it was clear he knew next to nothing about my project (the entire time he talked as if I’d only written 3 chapters, instead of the finished novel, a finished sequel, and 3 more drafted books after that), he still was onto something. He still had good advice to share, even if it wasn’t the advice coming out of his mouth. And that’s why I encourage all of you to sit through awful critiques, nod and smile, and write it all down. It doesn’t mean you need to obey and follow all the advice, but you can still learn something.

For example, he claimed that my main character Alice was really just me. He could only imagine ME, Emilie, writing and telling the story, instead of Alice. This is far from the truth (to the point where I don’t think I would even get along with her in real life), but her personality doesn’t really begin to shine until several chapters in—farther than what my professor had read. So even though he said Alice isn’t unique enough, and I disagree, I still learned something. Alice’s personality is fine. I don’t need to change her. BUT I don’t do a good enough job characterizing her in the first few chapters, because her unique personality just isn’t coming across in the beginning.

Same with his advice to make her more girly/bratty. This wasn’t a matter of personality—it was actually a problem with her reactions to events in the books. When Alice finds out spirits are real and they’re actually out to kill her, she reacts rather… calmly. She’s a bit unnerved for a chapter, then accepts the fact and goes all Buffy the Vampire Slayer on them. So even though he said she should be more girly, I don’t think he necessarily meant in the “oh no I broke a nail” sorta stereotype, but rather he knew she wasn’t quite freaking out enough. She wasn’t acting like a normal human would upon finding out the truth about the supernatural.

As for making her more “bratty,” he was just picking up on how little she reacts to a setting so different than her own. She grew up in a warm, dry climate, so suddenly spending time in the constantly moist, constantly raining climate of England, she’s probably be more likely to complain—simply on the grounds that it’s not what she’s used to. She doesn’t complain enough about a setting that’s so completely different than what she’s accustomed to, which really doesn’t capture the “fish out of water” feeling that makes more sense.

So there’s your lesson. I’m not going to follow the advice my professor actually explained to me, at least as far as characters/plot. But I listened to him because he felt something was off in those spots for a reason, and in order to make my novel better, I have to try to see where he’s coming from. The problem might not be what he thinks it is, but he knows there is a problem.

Read more about how to give constructive criticism and take constructive criticism. When it comes to workshopping, it takes practice and time to get a feel for what’s good advice, and what you can ignore. Get a writing group of 4-10 people together, whether it’s online or in person, and workshop each other’s stories on a regular basis!

–E

Hide was always there for Kaneki, always ready to support Kaneki how ever he needed it. Hide was there when Kaneki just needed company, when that was all Kaneki needed. Hide never prodded, never poked, never even brought up what he’d known from the beginning. Hide kept Kaneki’s secret when it could have benefited him greatly to reveal it, Hide kept Kaneki’s secret as easily as breathing. Hide risked his life many times over just to help Kaneki, had thrown away everything just to support Kaneki. 

And It’s such a one sided relationship because Kaneki has absolutely no idea, couldn’t even conceive the idea that Hide would accept his secret, so much so that when Hide appears in front of him he believes that he’s hallucinating. 

Hide’s an unsung hero that doesn’t ask for recognition, doesn’t need, doesn’t care if even Kaneki ever knows what he was doing for the other. 

Here’s the first part ot the thing i promised. I would love feedback. 1/????

I sat working on paperwork at my desk right outside of DI Greg Lestrade’s office. I came to work for greg helping with paperwork after I met him through my brother Sherlock. Greg and i hit if off quickly becoming close friends through work and my brother. Often we would get lunch together, and today was no different.

Greg came out of his office he already had his long coat on. “Ready for lunch,Ana?” his rough voice asked. I looked up from the file that was in front of me and shut it quickly.”Yeah. Yeah. just let me put this away..” 

“What file is that?” He asked leaning closer trying to look at it. 

“Uh nothing important… Just something I was helping my brother with, “I said closigf it in a drawer and quickly pulling my coat on. I stood and realized just how close he was to me. Our eyes met for a moment before he took and awkward step back offering his arm to me with a smile. I took it and we started to the small sandwich shoppe. Once we arrived we got our normal sandwiches and sat down at a table together. “what was that file over?” He asked as we started eating. I sighed knowing i had to tell him. “I/m building a file for Sherlock “

“Who on?” 

“James Moriarty. I know it sounds ridiculous since there is no solid proof that he even exists. But I just don’t think my brother is crazy and making it up. “ 

Greg nodded and set down his sandwich “Would you like some help?” 

“What?” i asked him confused 

“Do you want help? I don’t think your brother is crazy.or making it up either”

I nodded “Yes. We kind of need to figure this out before the media gets any worse. “ He nodded “I am scared what might happen if they do get any worse. “ He sighed and nodded. We finished out lunch and returned to the yard working on the file the rest of the day.