Essay emergency

Thank you to people who responded to my poetry emergency :P now we have another academic 911 call!

If anybody would like to help me with my essay (before 11 pm EST at the latest), PLEASE IM me and I will send you the link! My MVP editor isn’t available (lmao this is really last minute) and I have so much to do I literally have to remind myself to breathe.

This is what I need help with:
  • Filler words
  • General concision
  • Transitions (it’s super disjointed still)
  • Organization
  • Repetitiveness (I have some super long quotes and basically make points that could easily be cut down)
  • Word choice (this isn’t as necessary as I can go in later and fix some weak words)
If you’ve got time today and think you can help with any of those areas, IM me and I’ll give you the link!
This is it

This is it
This is all there is
This second
This minute
This hour

What are you doing with it?
What are you thinking?
What are you spending time on?
Who are you spending time with?

Invest in now
Be present in now
Be here and now

Believe in the total of what is and what you cannot see but be here… now

Friendly reminder to check you’re not holding tension in your body. Let your shoulders drop, unclench your hands and jaw. Take a deep breath. Much better.