Writing brakethrough, bla bla

I am happy, because I found a way to kill neither the queer character nor the poc in my story, that somehow fits way better in there than a tragic death, and even inhances the themes of the story further.
Other traces of bad writing I still need to rethink are
A woman dying from a mysterious sickness,
Lawful evil and chaotic good end up killing each other,
Somehow everyone is aro ace?
My writing style…..
A story that is written down like 0, 001% in a very non chronological way, in two different langueges
No research down whatsoever