I really love how you described Quinn in the chapter you posted; I'm curious - which aspect of him to you like to write the most about? His competence, his devotion to the SW or ... something else entirely? :3
I’m so glad you liked that last chapter! Hmmm what I like best about writing Quinn… Can I say ‘everything’? XD
I think from a writer’s perspective, I like how Quinn doesn’t have a foil in Iustitia. Gimrizh’s foil is Thutrel and Baras, Celebris and Jaesa certainly reflect and counter each other, ect, but the only person who’s really countering Quinn is himself. His over-analysis and anxiety is, in the narrative at least, his own worst enemy. He’s put down by people like Broysc, but at the end of the day, they’re just giving him rope - it’s Quinn that then goes ahead and hangs himself.