Soufli spirits

❥ “The tree which moves some to tears of joy is in the eyes of others only a green thing that stands in the way. Some see nature all ridicule and deformity… and some scarce see nature at all. But to the eyes of the man of imagination, nature is imagination itself.”
William Blake, 1799, The Letters 

Writing an immersive third person limited point of view.

What is third person? In third person pov the narrator refers to all character by third-person pronouns, such as he, she, or they. In contrast, first person pov uses the first person pronouns, I and me, for the narrator.

What is third person limited? Third person limited is the alternate to third person omniscient. In third person limited, you have one single pov character narrating the story at any given moment (though you can have as many of these limited pov characters as you want throughout the course of the story), whereas in third person omniscient, there is an omniscient (all knowing) narrator.

Why choose a limited third person pov? 

- The reader forms a stronger, more personal connection to your pov character(s).
- You can easily build suspense because the reader never knows for certain what the non-pov characters are thinking, feeling, or planning.
- You can more easily write an unreliable narrator because your narrator tells things only as they see them, and not as they truly are.

At the end of the day, there is nothing you can’t do with limited if you’re creative and willing to think outside the box. 

So you want to write a good limited third person pov then?

Keep in mind that most of these tips also translate to first person pov. In many ways, third person limited is very similar to first person, because you have a single narrator at any given time, and the reader is confined to that narrator’s interpretation of the world.

Here are some key things you need to remember while writing limited third person: 

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Good Girl (Smut)


Request: Can you do something like Keep It Down but with Aaliyah being in the room.

Word count: 3,512

I was lying between each of Shawn’s thighs on the couch, my back resting against his broad chest and his arms wrapped tightly around me.

We were cuddled up and tangled together under a warm blanket, watching some random movie on the TV that Aaliyah really wanted us to see with her. Aaliyah was lying under another blanket in the beanbag in front of us, resting her head on the edge of the grey sofa.

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Stoned On You

A/N: Hiii. This is a collaboration with me and @minhosmeanhoe . We figured out  that we’re the same person with the same dirty mind and this was the outcome. This is the longest and most smut I’m sure either of us has ever written in our lives and I hope you guys love reading as much as we loved writing it ! The song that goes with this fic is Stoned On You by Jaymes Young

Warnings: smut; smoking (weed), drinking, mentions of violence, hair pulling; I’m sure there is more but idk rn

Word Count: 12,529

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At last, it’s time to share some new drawings with you! Here’s another part of the series inspired by the iconic music videos from the 90′s. Big Jarvis is watching you… Yep, it’s Disco 2000 by Pulp! This guy also was in one of the Longpigs’ videos, he must be a local star in Sheffield. Wonder what became of him… I hope he’s doing well and didn’t die of heroin overdose.

der Aufkleber - sticker/adhesive label
die Büroklammer (Büroklammern) - paperclip
der Bleistift (Bleistifte) - pencil
der Buntstift (Buntstifte) - coloured pencil/crayon
der Druckbleistift (Druckbleistifte) - mechanical pencil
der Füller - fountain pen
der Farbstift (Farbstifte) - coloured pencil/pen
der Filzstift (Filzstifte) - felt-tip pen
der Fineliner - fineliner
das Gekritzel - scribble
das Gummiband (Gummibänder) - rubber band
der Hefter - stapler
die Klammer (Klammern) - staple
das Klebeband - sticky tape
der Kleber - glue
der Klebestift (Klebestifte) - glue stick
der Klebezettel - Post-it/sticky note
der Klebstoff - glue
das Klemmbrett (Klemmbretter) - clipboard
das Korrekturband - correction tape
die Korrekturflüssigkeit - correction fluid
der Korrekturstift (Korrekturstifte) - correction pen
die Kreide (Kreiden)
die Kreidetafel (Kreidetafeln)
der Kugelschreiber - ballpoint pen/Biro
der Kuli (Kulis) - ballpoint pen/Biro
das Lineal (Lineale) - ruler
der Locher - hole punch
das Mäppchen - pencil case
der Magnet (-en) (Magneten) - magnet
der Marker - marker
der Notizblock (Notizblöcke/Notizblocks) - notepad
das Notizbuch (Notizbücher) - notebook
der Ordner - folder
das Papier (Papiere) - paper
die Pappe (Pappen) - cardboard
der Pinsel - paintbrush
der Post-it - Post-it
der/das Radiergummi (Radiergummis) - eraser/rubber
der Rechner - calculator
die Schere (Scheren) - scissors
die Schere (Scheren) - scissors
pl Schreibwaren - stationery/writing instruments
der Spitzer - pencil sharpener
die Splinte (Splinten) - split pin
die Stecknadel (Stecknadeln) - pin
der Stempel - stamp
der Stift (Stifte) - pencil/pen
der Tesafilm - Sellotape/Scotch Tape
der Textmarker - highlighter
das Tipp-Ex - white out/liquid paper/Tipp-Ex
der Wachsmalstift (Wachsmalstifte) - wax crayon
der Winkelmesser - protractor
das Zeichendreieck (Zeichendreiecke) - set square
der Zirkel - compass