this was a nightmare to do bc a) dude’s design was tricky for me and b) i was trying out a new coloring technique and shit so yikes but i kinda like how it looks anyway

anyhow, this is Dagmar and i absolute adore him???? like holy shit what a Guy

Dagmar belongs to @missthunderkin​ (please check out their art it’s phenomenal also Dag is just??? amazing??? and i hope i did him some justice???)

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I was hoping to draw more illustrations of the sapient species on Dagmar but that didn’t happen. I’m still stuck in an art rut it seems.

Starting off with the tallest species, we have the “water raptors”. They’ll get an actual name at some point. 

Top left picture: Just noting major design features here. The fuzzy four-legged thing is supposed to be a chick. Chicks are much fluffier than adults.

Top right picture: “Water raptors” typically have s-shaped necks but I wanted to test how flexible their necks were. Things became silly very quickly.

Bottom left picture: One idea I have for this species is that they’re both quadrupedal and bipedal. “Water raptors” would maintain a bipedal stance on land but change to a quadrupedal stance when swimming or catching fish.

Bottom right picture: The very first drawing of the species. One advantage of their long necks is that they could hunt for their next meal from a distance without alerting prey. When hunting in the oceans, however, they’d have to enter the water. 


Joan and Dagmar were originally in the same world together,,so I’ve been trying to rework her into Otiose as well!

She’d be something considered Unusual..a very Thin black neph.
Most black nephilim have a rather slooow metabolism, and hold onto weight easily! But Dag here seems to have an excessively fast metabolism..and has trouble keeping up with the sheer amount of calories her body burns right through

And of course, she’ll always be a maneater


So APPARENTLY, Jergen is NOT Vilkas and Farkas’ father!
He rescued the boys from a necromancer.
I’m a little pissed at this because the lore didn’t have that information when I was doing my research before starting this blog. But still, I admit that I should’ve been a better mun and keep doing constant research. That doesn’t matter now, though.
I’m doing some minor changes to the plot to adjust to the new infos.
Jergen and Dagmar had been married for five years and they hadn’t been able to have any children. Jergen finds the boys when they were 7 months old and took them home where Dagmar fell in love with them almost instantly so they adopted them.
The rest stays as it was, Dagmar dies when the boys are 3 and Jergen has no choice but to take them to Jorrvaskr with him. Then hegoes to the Great war and dies when the boys are 8.
The end.
The two of them will be coming into the mortal world tomorrow for the birth of the new twins and then they will confess the truth to Vilkas and Farkas. I will not be held responsible for anyone’s feels.