- Editing something written by 18-25 year olds: At worst, they get way too personal over the details - at times write if they're hurt by the slightest criticism and need some distance. At best, just some minor rearrangement of sentence structure.
- Editing something written by a smarmy mid-30s drop out: Thinks he is the Next Hunter S Thompson. The Next William S Burroughs. Has a Propensity to always, Always, ALWAYS put capital letters where there shouldn't be. Structured Messes of Sentences.....let's start that again, shall we? The way he structures a sentence would make even Yoda Across the Face Slap Him he Shall for bad Syntax. In Love with his Opinion which is his Voice.
2, 5, 18, 25!! Your awesome!!