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I Wanna Be Your Country #20 in the series - A Beautiful Heresy - The Songs of Billy Franks
I Wanna Be Your Country
From Genius & Grace
I have, more than once taken other songwriters under my wing and taught them some very fundamental lessons on song craftsmanship. I’m not talking about your everyday pop trivia, but how to get on the road to being a songwriter who knows how to use words and melody to impart something thoughtful or heartfelt.
I usually start by asking the question, “what is it that compels you to write?” The most common answer is, “to tell people how I feel.” Wrong. You should want to make people feel how you feel.
How?
Well that’s a long and convoluted answer but the first lesson always starts with this: establish your vocabulary. What I mean by this is, once you have an idea and a title, certain words will prove to be more evocative than others.
I Wanna Be Your Country is the perfect example. On one hand it is a love song, on the other it is a critique of how governments behave. Poignant to me then, no less so now.
The idea was simple. If you love someone, a part of you wants to protect them and give them shelter from life’s hardships. What better way to express such feelings than to offer freedom, comfort and refuge: a place to call home. So, as you will see as the song unfolds, I chose a selection of words that refer to countries and their behaviour. Also words that express the plight of those who don’t feel they belong.
I wanna be your country
When you feel like a refugee
I want you to come to me
And I will grant you sanctuary
I wanna be your country
When you feel like you’re lost at sea
I want you to discover me
To recover me
I wanna be your country
I’m sure that lyric, which makes up the chorus, shows exactly what I mean.
It would become monotonous to repeatedly sing about what I want to be for someone, so the nifty little twist was to make the verses a list of things I wouldn’t be or do.
I would not see you hungry
I would not see you poor
I would not put a price on you
Or a black cross on your door
What I’m making here is a promise to keep someone from hunger, poverty, slavery or being cast aside. All of these protections I chose because they are things that so many nations don’t provide for their own vulnerable citizens.
The second part of the verse refers more to the idea of stopping people from speaking out against such injustice.
I don’t wanna keep you quiet
I don’t wanna keep you down
Come on out into the open
Take a look around
I wanna be your country
When you feel like a refugee
I want you to come to me
And I will grant you sanctuary
I wanna be your country
When you feel like you’re lost at sea
I want you to discover me
To recover me
I wanna be your country
Again, in the second verse the two themes of taking care of people and not repressing them are intertwined.
I would not see you homeless
I would not lead you blind
I would not beat you senseless
No, baby you can speak your mind
I don’t wanna call you comrade
I don’t wanna run this race
Come on out into the open
Get a load of this place!
I wanna be your country
When you feel like a refugee
I want you to come to me
And I will grant you sanctuary
I wanna be your country
When you feel like you’re lost at sea
I want you to discover me
To recover me
I wanna be your country
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Now we get to hear how different they would feel when they were in “your country.”
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When you can come as you are
Go as you please
Worship without getting down on your knees
You’re in my country
When you can be what you want
Do what you can
Welcome
Welcome to the heartland
I wanna be your country
When you feel like a refugee
I want you to come to me
And I will grant you sanctuary
I wanna be your country
When you feel like you’re lost at sea
I want you to discover me
To recover me
I wanna be your country
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Right here you have a metaphor that, over the course of 2 verses, a chorus and a middle section, is fully realised and fully expressed.
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I’m glad that this song came up relatively early in the series of essays because it establishes a rule that you will see adhered to throughout many of my songs. That rule, simply put, is a method of making people feel how you feel, rather than just dictating your emotions to the reader or listener.
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In this case the reader and listener was you. Thanks for dropping by.
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Best wishes,
Billy
A Beautiful Heresy – The Songs of Billy Franks
Artist: Billy Franks
Song: I Wanna Be Your Country
Album: Genius & Grace
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