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Anonymous asked:

How do I make a monarchy oppressive but still have some characters have a decent quality of life, at least compared to others? (Actually, how do I make oppressive monarchy in general? I see it a lot but I don't have much of a grasp on how it works in stories)

Writing an Oppressive Monarchy

To write an oppressive monarchy, you first have to understand what oppression is. When we talk about government oppression (versus systems of oppression), we're talking about a ruling group (be it a monarchy, government, society, or class) who exercises unjust authority and power on depowered groups. Restricted freedom, impeded civil liberties, withholding of basic necessities like food and medicine, excessive taxation, low wages, slavery, servitude, unfair judicial practice and punishment, or any combination, are just some of the burdens placed on an oppressed society by the oppressive ruling class. You can do research to learn more about government oppression as there's lots of information out there.

When you have an oppressive ruling group, there are only three ways someone can still have a decent quality of life in that society:

1 - They are part of the oppressive ruling group, whether that's the government, monarchy, etc.

2 - They are part of a middle group that benefits from the oppression but is not actually part of the ruling group. The citizens of the Capitol in The Hunger Games for example aren't the actual government, but they benefit from the oppression of the districts.

3 - They have escaped the reach of the oppressive ruling group and are able to live life on their own terms.

I hope that helps!

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You're worth waiting for. Write at your own pace. Your readers can wait a bit longer.

Your worth as a writer isn't hinged on your ability to constantly create & bang out writing.

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You are a writer because you write. That's truly all it takes. You don't have to prove your worth to anyone. Your love for storytelling and desire to create is enough.

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Literally cannot emphasize enough that my #1 writing advice is to stop being afraid. Stop being afraid of sounding too cringe, or too stupid, or too horrifying, or too horny, or too weird, or too much, or too little, or too you. You need to put your entire pussy into your art. Sure, it won't be to everyone's tastes, but if you keep yourself to the blandest tamest safest roads possible you will be of no one's tastes, not even yours.

You wouldn't be of "no one's" tastes but you wouldn't be of the right ones' tastes. Like... if you want to find an audience that genuinely and authentically enjoys your writing, you have to show them who you are, as a writer. Period. It may be more challenging than settling for something simpler and easier, but it's worth it to find people that actually enjoy what you want to write.

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97 character motivations

Here’s our masterlist of 97 character motivations that you can use in your novel to spark an idea for a character arc!
  1. Saving a family member from capture
  2. Saving a sibling from disease
  3. Saving a pet from danger
  4. Saving the world from ruin
  5. Saving a friend from heartbreak
  6. Saving the town from financial ruin
  7. Saving friends from dangerous deadly situations
  8. Saving a love interest from dying
  9. Saving themselves in a dangerous world
  10. Saving a community from falling apart
  11. Saving a child from a potentially dangerous circumstance
  12. Saving a place or location from evil forces
  13. Saving a ghost from limbo
  14. Overcoming a phobia
  15. Overcoming an addiction
  16. Overcoming marital struggles
  17. Moving on from loss
  18. Finding a significant other
  19. Finding a new family (not blood-related)
  20. Finding true biological family
  21. Finding out an old secret
  22. Finding a way home
  23. Reconnecting with long-lost friends
  24. Getting out of a dark state of mind
  25. Finding peace in life
  26. Beating a disease
  27. Beating an arch nemesis
  28. Forming a peaceful community
  29. Transforming a location
  30. Bringing someone back to life
  31. Winning a competition
  32. Going on an adventure
  33. Getting a dream job
  34. Keeping a secret
  35. Escaping a location of capture
  36. Proving a moral point
  37. Proving a political point
  38. Winning a political campaign
  39. Betray someone
  40. Ruin someone’s life
  41. Find a suspect or killer
  42. Find the answer to a mystery
  43. Discover ancient sites & secret histories
  44. Perform a successful ritual
  45. Summon the dead
  46. Save a country from dictatorship
  47. Become the most powerful in a community
  48. Outshine a family member in business success
  49. Prove someone wrong
  50. Win prize money to help someone in need
  51. Get revenge on someone who wronged them
  52. Find the person who wronged them
  53. Develop significant scientific progress
  54. Gain respect from family
  55. Get over an ex-lover
  56. Move on from a painful death
  57. Keep their community alive
  58. Lead their community
  59. Heal people in need
  60. Preserve a species (animal, alien, plant…)
  61. Discover new world
  62. Get recognition for hard work
  63. Become famous
  64. Get rich to prove themselves to people who doubted them
  65. Break a long tradition
  66. Challenge the status quo of a community
  67. Defeat a magical nemesis
  68. Take over a location to rule
  69. Find out truth behind old legends
  70. Help someone get over their struggles
  71. Prove their moral values
  72. Prove their worth to an external party
  73. Become a supernatural creature
  74. Keep something from falling into the wrong hands
  75. Protect the only person they care about
  76. Start a revolution
  77. Invent new technology
  78. Invent a new weapon
  79. Win a war
  80. Fit in with a community
  81. Atone for past sins
  82. Give top-secret information to an enemy as revenge
  83. Kill an ex-lovers current partner
  84. Reinvent themselves
  85. Raise a strong child
  86. Make it to a location in a strict time period
  87. Find faith
  88. Find enlightenment
  89. Find out more about the afterlife
  90. Confess love to a friend
  91. Solve a moral dilemma
  92. Have a child of their own
  93. Avoid being alone
  94. Run away from past struggles
  95. Reinvent themselves as a new person
  96. Impress a colleague or boss
  97. Avoid a fight or war breaking out
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“I’ve found most authors have the wrong mental picture of the process. Instead of a sprint, publishing is more like a marathon. Slow, steady and consistent action will get you your audience and success.”

— W. Terry Whalin

Probably the single hardest lesson for me to internalize in writing was that you don’t design a character you design a character arc.

One reason you as a writer might end up stuck with a flat or boring character, or one that just isn’t doing the things you need to create a vibrant plot, despite working out all the details of their life for hours, is because you’ve made the mistake I always do. You’ve made a character who is a blend of all the characteristics you envision for them, rather than saving some characteristics for the end of their journey. 

What do I mean by this? Maybe you envision a character who is a handsome prince, honest, brave, and true. In your plot, though, he’s going to be an antagonist for a bit but you don’t really want him to be seen as a bad guy, necessarily. But when you drop him into your story, he’s just… there. Being honest, brave, and true. 

That’s because the prince has no character arc. He is a static figure, a cardboard cutout. 

Let’s go a little deeper with a great example of one of the best character arcs in YA animation: Prince Zuko. He is, objectively, honest, brave, and true (to his cause of finding the Avatar) from the outset. But he’s also a dick. He’s a privileged, imperialist brat, who is rude to his uncle and vicious to our protagonists. 

By the end of the series, though, Prince Zuko is still honest, brave, and true, but he’s also a good person who has learned many lessons over the course of his trials and obstacles. He has failed over and over again at his initial goal of capturing the Avatar. He has failed at winning his father’s regard. He has failed at numerous smaller goals of day to day adventures. He has learned from all of these. We have seen his journey. But, if you started your vision of how to write Zuko from who he ends up being, he’s got nowhere to go as a character. 

It’s not just about what flaws he has corrected though. It’s about what lessons about life he has internalized. What flawed views of the world he has corrected and how. 

Rather than saying, “The character starts out a dick and learns to be nice,” be more specific. “This character starts out believing the empire he is loyal to is morally in the right for its conquests, but over the course of working for that empire’s ruler and seeing his cruelty first hand, not to mention fighting the empire’s enemies and mingling with its civilian victims, he becomes a better person and learns the error of his ways.” 

Already, right there, you have more than a cardboard character. You have a character who has an arc that molds to your plot

Helpful Questions to Ask:

  • What flaws does the character possess?
  • How do these flaws influence the character’s mindset, perspective, intuition, and behavior?
  • What variables emerge, in the course of the story, that expose these flaws to the reader, to the character in question, or to other characters?
  • How does the character react to these inevitable conflicts? What are the consequences for how the character reacts to these conflicts or contradictions?
  • What are the stakes for staying the course? What are the consequences for thinking about change? What are the consequences for actually pursuing change? What are the consequences for pursuing change and failing (or succeeding) publicly (or in secret)?
  • Reassess: What flaws does the character possess?
  • How has the character’s experience(s) in confronting these flaws influenced the character’s role and interaction with the primary conflict set in the story?
  • How does the story change as a result?
Anonymous asked:

You don’t own fanfics. They’re inherently public domain because they aren’t your IP. Agree or disagree with AI, there are no grounds for “protection” from AI because it isn’t your IP to begin with. That’s what you chose when you chose this medium

Oh dear.

Okay, you get an answer, because at least you took the effort to write your ask out properly, even if you are hiding behind the grey, sunglassed circle.

Do I, or any fanfic author for that matter, have any legal claims to our work? No, not really, no. (Although if someone took a fic, filed off the serial number–deleted the fandom specific elements–, and then had it published for financial gain, yeah, that would be a case.)

BUT

Fandoms are built on a social contract that says we respect each others work, the effort people put into their art. We don’t steal or disrespect the work of our peers. By feeding people’s fanworks to AI you both steal and disprect it, and we need to make people realize that before it’s too late–before fandom falls apart, because there will be no more real, actual fanworks.

Disrepectfully,

Orlissa

(i can’t believe I have to say this)

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Also this is not true. You do in fact have the copyright to the specific writing you did in a fic, because that’s not how copyright law works. Like this is not a grey area.

People who write IP content for corporations give up their copyright on a contractual basis–the company wants writing they can sell about characters/settings they own without getting entangled in royalty obligations etc, so they hire people. Who sign contracts saying they don’t own what they write as part of that job.

That’s why you don’t own Star Wars stuff you wrote for Disney; you specifically agreed not to own it.

Writing for IP you don’t own leaves you in a position where you can’t legally monetize it (without taking out the Owned parts ad rebranding), but it absolutely does not automatically cede or void copyright. That is super not a thing.

SUPER not a thing, I cannot say this enough.

I can’t sell my Batman fic, but neither can DC Comics without my duly authorized consent. Because they own Batman, but not the prose I composed about him.

Do not perform that kind of massive corporate overreach for them. Holy shit. Do they not own enough.

It’s fascinating that this misconception of copyright still exists. Haven’t we all seen the posts on here where authors beg fans to please not send them fanfic of their works? They’re not doing that because they feel like it, they do that because fans legally own their words and ideas, and an author who takes them even unintentionally can in fact end up in real legal trouble for taking something that’s not theirs. It doesn’t matter whether they own the canon.

I need a word for horny but not in a sexual way more just like wanting kisses and hugs and affection or something

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This is a great question! The best way to write about desire in a way that makes readers feel invested is to write around it.

Instead of using just a single word, use language that hints at something simmering below the surface. That way, you build tension for your readers, making them invested in the outcome of your characters' relationships. Here are some tips for how to write romantic desire in various ways (including some handy synonyms at the end as well).

Unconscious movements

  • Covert glances
  • Licking and biting lips
  • Mirroring the other's movements
  • Parting or crossing of legs
  • Touching one's own skin
  • Swallowing more than usual
  • Blinking rapidly
  • Short breaths
  • Playing with one's hair
  • Fidgeting
  • Leaning closer than usual

Internal feelings

  • A fluttering heartbeat
  • Comfort in the other's presence
  • Knots in your stomach
  • The sensation of other sounds being muffled
  • Nervous tingling
  • Short of breath
  • Hypersensitivity
  • Sudden weakness
  • Thumping pulse
  • Emotional overwhelm
  • Goosebumps

Behaviours

  • Surrounding oneself with reminders of the object of desire (like things that smell of them, or an object they hold dear)
  • Creating reasons to spend more time with the other person
  • Loss of inhibition
  • Impatience and irritability
  • Setting active goals to attain the object of desire
  • Conscious and subconscious fixation
  • Changing oneself to better suit the other's wants
  • Feigning other interests to promote jealousy

Showing resolved desire

  • Finally feeling personally fulfilled
  • A sense of calm and peace
  • A shift in focus from pursuit to personal happiness
  • Feelings of contentment
  • A change of life priorities
  • Feeling like an obstacle has been overcome
  • A more relaxed manner or expression
  • Personal and romantic growth

Showing unrequited desire

  • Pining for lost love
  • Frustration and anger
  • Bottling one's feelings
  • Living in denial
  • Feeling rejected
  • Falling into a personally damaging pattern of pining for the wrong people
  • Strained friendships
  • A sense of disconnection and isolation

Some handy synonyms

  • Craving
  • Longing
  • Yearning
  • Wanting
  • Hunger
  • Thirst
  • Covet
  • Infatuation
  • Obsession
  • Attraction
  • Passion
  • Fascination
  • Lust
  • Pining
  • Aching
  • Burning
  • Need
  • Love
  • Devotion
  • Rapture
  • Appetite
  • Frenzy
  • Frisky
  • Amorous (thank you, @quotidias, for the contribution!)
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Goooood day. I'm asking you this because this problem has been bugging me and making my writing seem dull and very boring. When I edited my writing I realized that all my characters talk the exact same way. Like it's just one person talking the whole time. Do you have any tips so I can fix this problem? Please and thank you.

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Giving Your Characters a Unique Voice

When all your characters sound like the same person, it’s almost always because you--as the writer--don’t really know who these people are. You might have a general picture in your mind of what they look like, but beyond that they’re cardboard images. Part of fleshing characters out is giving them a unique character voice.

Character voice is the way the character’s personality comes out in the things they think and say. The following things are characteristics of character voice:

- how little or how often they speak - whether they are concise when they speak or wordy - words, slang, or catchphrases they use often - the amount of obscenities they use, if any - speech quirks like saying “um” or “uh” a lot - bad habits like interrupting people or trying to finish others’ sentences - their attitude and how it affects the things they think and say - tone, quality, and pitch of their actual voice - accents - what they do when they speak (do they use a lot of hand gestures, etc.)

So, the very first thing you have to do is flesh your characters out. Give each one a unique personality and know how that personality effects how they speak, when they speak, what they say, how they say it, and their body language while they speak. Someone who is shy or reserved probably won’t speak a lot, and when they do they’ll probably speak in short, direct sentences. A bubbly extrovert, on the other hand, will probably speak a lot more often. They may talk fast, speaking in several short sentences in rapid succession, interrupting themselves to snort or giggle. Someone who’s brash or self-centered may try to dominate the conversation, frequently interrupting others or arguing with whatever else is said. Personality plays a big role in character voice, so it’s important that you flesh those personalities out so you can see these people as more than just flat pictures in your mind.

Another thing you’ll want to do is figure out any quirks or hallmarks related to how the person speaks. This could be an accent (which you can state when they speak, as in, “she spoke with a country twang”) or cultural/regional dialect. It could be using a lot of technical jargon or rarely using contractions. It could be swearing a lot or calling everyone “sugar” or “hon.” These kinds of quirks can even extend to body language and facial expressions while speaking. Figure out a few of these kinds of quirks or hallmarks for each character, and they’ll be that much more distinct when they speak! :)

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ᴛʜɪʀᴛʏ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ ʙᴜɪʟᴅɪɴɢ Qᴜᴇꜱᴛɪᴏɴꜱ

  1. what are major cities in this world?
  2. what is the currency?
  3. what is the form of government?
  4. what is the name of the leader?
  5. what aesthetic fits the world?
  6. what creatures roam this world?
  7. is there a type of magic / sorcery?
  8. is this in the past or future?
  9. do earth and humans exist?
  10. what is the weather like?
  11. describe the main locations
  12. what is the belief system?
  13. what are some unique animals and plants?
  14. what genre does this fit in?
  15. describe the daily life of an inhabitant
  16. what are the world's populations?
  17. are there social classes?
  18. how did this world come to be?
  19. what are the stakes?
  20. how is the cost of living?
  21. what are the central areas of this world?
  22. is the technology more or less advanced?
  23. do the people in this world have enemies?
  24. what are big events that have taken place?
  25. how is gender and orientation assumed?
  26. what are expectations?
  27. what are the world's biases?
  28. what dark history does it have?
  29. what is important to the economy of this world?
  30. who are the figureheads of this world?