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All Different Endings of Maurice and Alec from E.M. Forster's Maurice

Having been to the King's College archive myself, as well as read the Abinger edition of Maurice (which examines the differences between various versions of the manuscripts stored at the archive), I can conclude that there are 3 main different versions of the novel: from 1914, 1932, and 1952-1959, each differing from one another in Forster's treatment of the relationship between Maurice and Alec after the British Museum.

1914 version:

Order: British Museum - Southhampton - Penge with Clive - Epilogue

  • NO HOTEL SCENE, NO BOATHOUSE
  1. In this version, Maurice and Alec do not spend the night together after the British Museum; Alec asks Maurice to but Maurice refuses with a long speech about how they shouldn't be together because of their class differences. So they part ways instead.
  2. Maurice, however, does go to the Southhampton to see Alec off. After not seeing Alec there, Maurice leaves with Reverend Borenius at end of the chapter directly to Penge to say goodbye to Clive.
  3. The reunion between them is implied first during Maurice's farewell to Clive—"I've wired to him (that I understand why he missed the boat)"—and then specifically illustrated in the written epilogue.

1932 version:

Order: British Museum - Southhampton - Penge with Clive

  • NO HOTEL SCENE, NO BOATHOUSE, NO EPILOGUE
  1. The British Museum chapter is pretty much the same as the published version.
  2. Maurice and Alec stay the night but there is NO hotel chapter written out. Their night together is only described in 4 lines at the beginning of the Southampton chapter as an "unwise escapade".
  3. The scene thus goes from Maurice saying "To hell with with it" directly to him at the Southampton.
  4. The end of the Southampton chapter as well as the farewell chapter with Clive conform to the 1914 version: i.e. no boathouse reunion.
  5. Epilogue by 1932 had already been disregarded by Forster, so the only clue we have to the reunion between Maurice and Alec is Maurice's line "I've wired to him (that I understand)".
  6. Therefore the 1932 version is the least hopeful in regards to the happy ending between Maurice and Alec.

1950's version:

Order: British Museum - Hotel - Southhampton - Boathouse - Penge with Clive

  1. This is basically the final and published version that we all have read.
  2. The hotel chapter was drafted out in 1952 and added to the 1932 manuscript.
  3. But it wasn't until 1958 that Forster was able to finally and fully pen out how Maurice and Alec reunite at the boathouse.

It must be noted that Forster had troubles finding a way to bring Maurice and Alec together, and in fact refused to reunite them for decades. The boathouse reunion, Alec sending a wire to Maurice, and Maurice not receiving that wire but instinctively knowing where Alec is nonetheless—all were only conceived by Forster in 1958.

Therefore—and this is really the most touching and important part—according to scholars and editors of the Abinger edition...

"now we shan't be parted no more, and that's finished" were by logic the very last words Forster had written for the novel. Alec's promise marks the end of Maurice's search for a friend, as well as the end of Forster's writing progess for Maurice. It is both a fictional and a real-life farewell.

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You went! <333 There are thoughts I could add, but that’s for later.

NB: By ‘scholars and editors of the Abinger edition’, you mean the great Philip Gardner, who is (no exaggeration) a god for his contribution to Forster scholarship (not only as the textual scholar whose close work produced the Abinger Edition of Maurice, but also as the editor of E.M. Forster: The Critical Heritage and Forster’s published journals and diaries).

‘Now we shan't be parted no more, and that’s finished’ is poignant for a yet further reason: as Gardner writes, the words mark the closure of Forster’s journey of writing Maurice (‘that’s finished’) but, Gardner suggests, may also be the very last words of fiction Forster wrote.

You can hear more from Gardner about the complexities of Maurice’s manuscript journey – including what we don’t know – in BBC Radio 3’s wonderful 2018 documentary Literary Pursuits: E.M. Forster's Maurice: https://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b08xcqwk

For my posts in which I shared extracts showing wider significant differences between the 1914 Greenwood manuscript of Maurice and the 1959/1971 published novel, see my Maurice 1914 Project posts (made in 2013–14 in the run-up to the legalisation of same-sex marriage in the UK).

I saw you leaning out of the window, I was watching. Shouldn't live much longer in this country that's why i keep putting it so watch for you.

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"Saw you leaning out of the window instead. I saw you the next night too. I was out on the lawn."

"Do you mean you were out in all that infernal rain?"

"Yes .. . watching ... oh, that's nothing, you've got to watch, haven't you . . . see, I've not much longer in this country, that's how I kep putting it."

"How beastly I was to you this morning!"

"Oh that's nothing – Excuse the question but is that door locked?"

– Forster’s version (1959/1971), Maurice, Chapter 38

Source: mauriceline

Wait so when Alec is awkwardly apologizing to Maurice for not accepting his tip, he says it’s because he thought it was too much and he didn’t feel comfortable taking that much money from him. Not long after this we learn that Alec was already falling in love with Maurice at this point, and was likely just happy for the chance to be around him for a while.

And then Archie tries to give him a bigger tip and he takes it with no hesitation. We also learn later that Alec HATES Archie (and pretty much everybody else at Penge, tbh). So, Maurice can hang out with him all day for free, but if Archie want to be within 10 yards of him he has to pay out the nose. It’s so fucking funny. Alec does not get enough credit for being the funniest motherfucker in that book.

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Annnd Forster loves parallels, so:

Maurice: takes one week’s ‘holiday’ from work to stay at Penge as a disguise for commuting back/forth to London to try/fail at gay-cure hypnotism

Alec: hands in his notice two weeks before ‘emigrating’ & immediately seduces his boss’s ex because ‘I’ve not much longer in this country’, predictably derailing Maurice’s hypnotism ‘cure’

So if...

"he turned to the practices he had abandoned as a boy"

...what about when thinking about:

"young man" with "bright brown eyes" who wasn't "damn ugly"

?

(Nah... The author wouldn't hesitate do write about it, would he?)

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And indeed he doesn’t hesitate :) Maurice, Chapter 42:

But all that night his body yearned for Alec’s, despite him. He called it lustful, a word easily uttered, and opposed to it his work, his family, his friends, his position in society. In that coalition must surely be included his will. For if the will can overleap class, civilisation as we have made it will go to pieces. But his body would not be convinced. Chance had mated it too perfectly. Neither argument nor threat could silence it, so in the morning, feeling exhausted and ashamed, he telephoned to Mr Lasker Jones and made a second appointment.”
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oh god I have zero points, I am pointless and ancient and gentle 

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I somehow have 4 points despite being ancient because e.g. we couldn’t afford a Walkman

‘Mature’ followers/mutuals ... reblog if you STILL DO some of these. (Me: 5 points)

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Maurice Hall being awkward and in love with Alec (and realizing the feeling is mutual)  👁👄👁

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Maurice Hall perfecting the art of contemptuous queer smoking and iconically facing down Borenius.

PS: There was long ago a whole thread on LJ speculating on what the going-away gift for Alec is.*

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@lalalaugenbrot #tag appreciation :)))

There was a long-ago Tumblr post where someone was liveblogging Maurice and they literally just posted

FORNICATING

Also the hilarious ‘surprised’ brow-raise in 6 (‘fornicating? No shit, Reverend’)

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I’m telling you all this because of your charitable interest in him

Sure ... obviously if you’re going to post Maurice/Clive sex fic on AO3 for Valentine’s Day, it totally makes sense to steal your title from one of Alec’s beautiful love letters to Maurice. :((( Oh dear oh dear.

BBC4 has repeated Fortunes of War (1987) with Emma Thompson, Kenneth Branagh, and Rupert Graves, as well as a host of acting talent. Rupert's acting is award-worthy, it's so thoughtful and physical. There is tragedy and humour and ordinariness in there, people caught up in the war, living their lives and almost in denial of what happens around them. The war visits them, affects them in personal, sometimes visceral ways, and yet seems to intrude on them, inconvenient and irritating rather than momentously life changing. There is a timeless, topical quality to this series, as an illustration of how war disrupts ordinary lives. Adapted from The Balkan Trilogy and The Levant Trilogy written by Olivia Manning (1908-1980), and described by writer Anthony Burgess (of 'A Clockwork Orange' fame) as 'the finest fictional record of the war produced by a british writer', it was largely based on the author's own experiences during the war.

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Meaning that Fortunes of War is on BBC i-Player! THANK YOU for this heads-up!

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Maurice Hall being awkward and in love with Alec (and realizing the feeling is mutual)  👁👄👁

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Maurice Hall perfecting the art of contemptuous queer smoking and iconically facing down Borenius.

PS: There was long ago a whole thread on LJ speculating on what the going-away gift for Alec is.*