I DON'T THINK YOU GET LOVE PABLO NERUDA
I have always found something quite disturbing about Pablo Neruda's famous poem so here is his poem but beneath it is my version of it. Indy
IF YOU FORGET ME by Pablo Neruda
I want you to know one thing.
You know how this is: if I look at the crystal moon, at the red branch of the slow autumn at my window, if I touch near the fire the impalpable ash or the wrinkled body of the log, everything carries me to you, as if everything that exists, aromas, light, metals, were little boats that sail toward those isles of yours that wait for me.
Well, now, if little by little you stop loving me I shall stop loving you little by little.
If suddenly you forget me do not look for me, for I shall already have forgotten you.
If you think it long and mad, the wind of banners that passes through my life, and you decide to leave me at the shore of the heart where I have roots, remember that on that day, at that hour, I shall lift my arms and my roots will set off to seek another land.
But if each day, each hour, you feel that you are destined for me with implacable sweetness, if each day a flower climbs up to your lips to seek me, ah my love, ah my own, in me all that fire is repeated, in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten, my love feeds on your love, beloved, and as long as you live it will be in your arms without leaving mine.
My UNCONDITIONAL LOVE version of Pablo Neruda's famous poem:
FORGET YOU... NEVER by Indira Breiter-Noro
Well now, if little by little you stop loving me I shall increase my love for you more by more
If suddenly you forget me I will not forget you, I will gird my loins, And steel my spirit To face life without you But forget you - never
Does a mother forget the child within her womb? Even if she forgets I will never forget you
If you think it long and mad, the wind of banners that passes through my life, and you decide to leave me at the shore of the heart where I have roots, remember that on that day, at that hour I shall stretch out my arms so that my energy flows out and around the whole earth touching you wherever you may be
I shall sink my roots deep within the earth to grasp hold of the solid rock so that I may never move from the memory of you
If when you have forgotten me And you are feeling lonely And a graceful bird should fly near you and cheer you up it will have been sent by me by my kiss upon the breeze because I will never forget you
And when you have forgotten me If life's frustrations get you down And gloom covers you and all of a sudden a beam of sunlight reaches down and warms your soul
my thoughts and wishes for all good things for you, forever
Because I will never forget you
That day when sadness wraps around your heart like a tight bandage squeezing the tears out of you and suddenly you feel a release of the pressure and a peace and calm enters your soul it will be me praying for you sending you love through time and space
because I will never forget you... इन्दिरा