xinni replied to your photoset“SHINee Key Everybody Photocard for sale! I will also trade for…”

Why’re you selling this? :c

I am not a photocard collector~! I am more into collecting albums and fan merchandise. So selling my photocards can get me more of those things ~ It also helps me save up money for future giveaways ~

thelatestkate said:

After you receive this, you must share 5 random facts about yourself and then copy and send to your ten fave followers.

slkdgj d’aww xinni, this gave me warm fuzzies <333

HMMMM

  • I have really pretty blonde curly hair uvu*
  • I think I’m a fairly kind and nice person
  • I have a 4 month old Doberman puppy named Kida
  • I really like looking at fish and ocean life of all sorts
  • I also have 2 betta fish named Spyre and Tancred
Critique (27/8/14)

Critique for my first draft

  • link between 1st and 2nd photo not clear, similar to link between 4th and 5th photo 
  • stairs could be taken from a side view to show the stairs going up and down clearer 
  • 2nd to 4th clear that subjects are moving up
  • 4th photo it’s strange that the subject suddenly changes
  • pole in 3rd photo is weird
  • not obvious that the 1st and 5th photo, the staircases are the same
  • people may not leave a building by a staircase
  • the girl in red wasn’t my subject, but thought to have been my subject because she seemed to be the main subject based on lighting and the colour she was wearing 

I suggested trying a different storyline, about five fingers, each separately shot, then the last frame showing the whole hand with all five fingers having a resigned expression. Xinni suggested that two fingers probably squabbled, then the thumb tried to resolve it and there would be more of a storyline. 

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