You don’t have to write as much, cut it down to about 2-3 paragraphs, Sammy.. this is just to start it off.
Dean & his brother had been in Louisiana for a couple of hours now. They had travelled to this exact area, and stayed in this exact motel after getting a call from some man on their father’s old cell phone. He had claimed he had known John Winchester since their childhood days, and even went to the same school as their dad. He was asking for help too, because by the sound of his voice on the other end, this man was frantic and petrified.
"Alright, calm down." Dean had told him in his deep, husky voice. Trying his best to reassure him. "We’ll be in the area in about an hour, tops. Call me again at that time." Dean gave the man his cell number, and that’s when the boys soon hit the road again.
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