Switch: Maybe she needs to get a new red pen? Pun: I don’t have enough ink for that!
Modnote: Sorry it took so long, as you might see i changed my style once more, going back to basics. Also i am now taking more time for the pictures. It pays off, i found a good amount of errors by coming back to the pictures later and take a new look at them. Still a lot to do, but at least i improve.